That was sad...and touching. Lovely poem...story...It's a bit of both, ain't it. ;) Nice work, ladies.

I love the way you portray Gods love... its moving (sounds cheesey but it does)I also like the way you tell reviewers that God loves and cares for them no matter what and that he is always their for them. i encourage you to stay strong in your life and in your faith.

I updated RTSS I hope you'll like the chappie

God Bless,

BehindtheShadow

yeah i'd definitely say some good came out of it.
it's quite a nice little story, with some good writing.
well done.

Really nice.

Oh my word, that gave me chills! I loved the original, but you made some major improvements!!

OK, I'm not going to flame you, I just have an honest..well not really question. More like a thought process to share with you.

Exhibit A) God loves everyone, correct? I'm sure you would say yes.

Exhibit B) Since God loves everyone, He would not want anyone to go to Hell, correct? Again, I'm sure you would say yes.

Exhibit C) Many people believe in God without proof. Yes.

Exhibit D) Many don't. Like me.

Exhibit E) God is all powerful, and could therefore easily prove His existence to those who don't believe.

Exhibit F) If everyone believed, they would not go to Hell, and that would make God happy.

Exhibit G) But, I DON'T believe. And nothing has been done to prove to me that God exists, even though, by Christians' own claims, He could do so easily.

Exhibit F) Therefore one of two possibilities exist:
1) God doesn't love me.
2) God doesn't exist.

See Exhibit A, God loves everyone. Therefore the ONLY possibility is that God does not exist.

I have loads more if that didn't do it for you.