I love your story so far. Very well writen, but I dont think a fire nation crew would be all that nice to Katara plus Zuko is a little out of character, I mean the whole treating Katara as an honered guest is a little over the top, but hey it's your story.

wow! sorry that I don't say so much, but wow! that was great, Iroh!

Very good, characters personalities were great and the humour had me wetting myself.
No offence or anything but I think the storyline may have been slightly rushed.
But apart from that, great story and update soon.
Miss Katara x

Favourite chapter yet, so hilarious! I love the birds and the bees talk LOL
God i'm wetting myself ! :)
Miss Katara x

ah please update this story is by far one of the best i've ever read (i kinda spend all my time reading fan-fics) anyway please update hands basket of cyber cookies tank you for this story

Very well done story. I'm enjoying it immensely! Thank you for sharing it with us!

I have to say this:
this story is mindblowingly amazing. I couldn't stop reading from start to now (which is quite a feat for me, considering I like to stop and do random stuff every few paragraphs for normally reading fanfics). The plot is enthralling, the way you wrote it is fabulous, and now I'm in in Avatar-induced craze.
Very nice.

I totally love Iroh is this story!

“Wine, Uncle?” Zuko frowned. “Are you serving alcohol to minors?”

Iroh pretended to look thoughtful for a moment. “Why, yes, I guess I am!” He said happily.

That is like my favorite part of the story! Keep updating!

wow! i read the whole story
and it is great! aww poor ty lee
really really realy hope you update soon!
c'mon lol dont leave us hanging!

More please :)

SUKI! I hope...but Ty Lee would be an equally interesting addition to the group. Please update soon - this is a great story, one of the few I've stuck too after the Zutara happened. I would love to see how you interpret the rest of the story too! UPDATE! I hope ML7 is on your case...

wow... that was good but i think Zuko should've been like "Mai! OMJ No AZULA IMA FUKIN KILL U, U B-YOTCH!" u no cuz they were like childhood friends... so yea cant w8 for the next chapter!!

o0o0o0 nina guesses jet, smellerbee, and longshot! but longshot doesnt talk... maybe the Duke too?

I LUV HORNY ZUKO!

LOL THEY'RE DRUNK! I LUV IT! THIS IS AWESOME!