Nice start. It's good to see that you got their ages right. Some writers have them entering their seventh year at sixteen and haven't even had their apparition text yet. So it's good to see someone writing this correctly. On to chapter two I go. *^_^*

Awh, so cute and like... Mysterious :)

I *love* this story! I have been reading it on for ages! Thank you for making a contribution to my fan fiction reading/writing!

~HufflepuffEdwardCullen13 (aka elphaba13 on )

awesome story!(:

I absolutely loved it. I'm so glad that you didn't over-cliche it like most people seem to do. Good job.

Aw! This story is so sweet! Lol I know it's old, but still good! :D

aww, loved it! This one was definitely different from all the other masquerade fics out there. I loved that you added a twist by having the death eaters take off James' mask rather than James doing it himself. Just enough action and fluff to balance each other out. Great job! Thanks for writing!
~Runa :)

I like the concept of the mask being a sort of symbol to them, reminding them how everything started. The writing is good, but there are a few grammatical errors. Overall, I liked it. How do you get so many reviews? Two years, I guess.

cute story, I loved the end...

OH HOW ABSOLUTELY ADOREABLE !!
IT'S SO CUTE !!

utterly beautiful. i applaud u!

Sayonaara!

JimSox149

Aw, very sweet story :)

OMG! i couldnt believe this was an l/j story by you that i hvnt read! i almsot cried when i looked at your stories b.c i rem all the other good l/j stories you wrote! god im so messed up lol its jsut your stories were so good! ugh i cant erase them from my memory! anywho fantastic job it was a great story and please please keep writing l/j!! kk later dude

brilliant story!! simply brilliant!

the red masked guy better be james. good story, neways.