Reviews for Chains of the Past

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Wolfman 2008-07-23 ch 5, anon.	abuseNow when did Ryoko become a relationship counselor?
Chris ShadowMoon 2008-06-21 ch 21,	abuseGenma really is an idiot, isn't he? if he was so smart, he'd realize that nothing he could do would work. Is this dead? I hope not. It's a great story.
mikebreslau 2008-05-08 ch 21,	abuseWonderful fic, but if you don't like being in suspense forever, don't start it. It's maddeningly incomplete. Mike
Nysk 2008-03-19 ch 20,	abuseI do hope you will continue to write this and many of your other highly enjoyable stories. I am very sorry to have not seen any updates to any of them.
Kinai 2008-01-29 ch 6,	abuseAnd here we have the typical selfless fandom Nabiki that is the only one that care for her family and support it with the insufficient money of her schemes. And of course we have the typical spoiled princess fandom Akane. I don't know where people got these characterizations, but they are too OOC so that the only thing similar to the original characters are their names. My opinion. Kinai.
0takkun 2007-11-06 ch 21,	abuseWell, it certainly looks interesting enough to ignore the so-so narrative from the first chapters, and though you're basically retelling the whole Tenchi Muyo timeline with Ranma around you've still managed to catch my attention. (I ended up here following a link on a fanfiction forum). I have no idea when/if you are continuing this, from your profile I get the idea that you're working on it, but your comments have no date to them. I highly advice you at least let us know when was the last time you looked at your fics ... too many abandoned fics out there already. I hope we can see more of your work soon.
Sdarian 2007-09-24 ch 21,	abuseYou'd think with all the things Genma has done coming out, that they'd call his mom in to have her checked by Washu for alterations or drugs or whatever. Great story by the way. I'm off to read 'Like Mother Like Son' next and I can only hope it is just as good. Good luck, and keep up the good work!
Sdarian 2007-09-24 ch 20,	abuseYes! Washu smacked her down! I never did care all that much for Ayeka. Aside from the hole 'he needed to have two wives anyway' deal, I could never see why (aside from him being a nice guy) he didn't just go with Ryoko. There was no compairsion between the two: Ayeka was a stuck up royal who would have dragged him into the ever annoying life of endless politics, Ryoko was the totally awesome space pirate with her living (and compact) space ship with which they would have been able to spend the rest of their lives doing whatever it is that they wanted. Umm...rant over. Anyway, good job on this story. It's been great so far. Keep it up!
Asgeras 2007-08-29 ch 21,	abuseArgh...please don't let this die. This is a great fic. True, it has its problems, but it's still done fairly darn well. If you are planning on continuing, I would suggest you take care of the rest of the Nerima Wrecking Crew as well, including: Kodachi, Tatewaki, and Akane. The first two are more important, since you've at least partially resolved the problems Akane's been having, thanks to her Psychiatric visits. Kodachi and Tatewaki are too obsessed to give up easily, even if Akane is still around to keep Kunou's mind somewhat occupied. Let me state that I love the fact that Ranma and Tenchi haven't really been competing against each other in this story. All too often, Ranma/ Tenchi xovers turn into a battle on which side can get the bigger harem, or has more powerful. You haven't really done either of these yet. Well, that's it for now. If you put up another chapter later, I'll give you another review then. Thanks for what you've written so far. ^^
robzone 2007-07-04 ch 21,	abusethis is a great story but when are you going to update it. washu would fit right in with ranma and nabiki.
Vilkath 2007-04-02 ch 21,	abuseStill interested in where this story is going, you have started to meld the two series a little better but they still seem kind of seperate most of the time. One the biggest questions is Genma I suppose. If he is not stupid, and truely smart and crafty as you portray him. It seems to be an awful lot of effort to merely get a dojo, or what ever real plans he has. Thinking the 'Dojo' scheme was just to get them to run off together. Since the dojo scheme makes no sense, all the rare herbs, potion recipies and other elaborate things Genma is supposed to have done to set up Ranma's life speaks way to well for such a small goal. The ends just don't add up to the means, which would have cost way more then a simple Dojo. Unless of couse something special burried underneath the dojo.. like a demon seal.. or something.
Vilkath 2007-04-02 ch 12,	abuseJust felt the need to review the story up to this point. Usualy I try save it for the last current chapter I can read, and give a bigger over view. But I just felt this needed to be said, even if it changes in future chapters. As much as I like this story, events almost seem a little to seperated for a cross over. Ranma and Tenchi are there, more or less together. But the effect so far on each others lives is pretty small, more like neighbors then anything else. All the major events in Tenchi and Ranma's life so far, have little to do with eachother. I usaly like to see cross overs mesh better then this, or not bother crossing at all. So far the tenchi universe hasn't seemed to change to much, and all Ranma's changes are more veiled past events, which happen before the fic starts. Little to do with current events, and the Tenchi gang. Like I said, you may include the two cast better in the future, just had the feeling so far, they are kind of seperate.
Blackdex 2007-02-16 ch 21,	abuseGood piece, not great, but good. Ciao
Sean Malloy-1 2007-01-11 ch 21,	abuseNice work with this story so far, I hope you will add more chapters when you get the chance.
Lord Nightfyre 2006-11-04 ch 21,	abuseI just readed the whole series. I love it. Will there be anymore chapter?

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