 iloveit 2006-11-25 . chapter 3Okay, this is awesome. I laughed so many times and the characters are just perfect. It can be hard to write humor while keeping everything realistic and in character, and you guys totally pull it off. More please! (LOL, I sound like a five year old asking for seconds on dessert) |
 SweetNJuicyX0 2006-03-24 . chapter 3good chapters.. i really wanna find out if riley is gonna do something..but i bet he will.. update soon |
 Banksiesbabe99 2006-03-24 . chapter 3Oh Ilike this, this is good lol.
Riley's so up to something lol. Or are you trying to trick us into believing he is?
I loved how Fulton was the smart one of the group lol, I always imagined him to be one of the guys who sit back and assess before actually saying anything lol.
Anyways update soon. Keep it up!
NICE ONE! |
 Emily 2006-03-23 . chapter 3 YOU CAN DO IT GUY!!
Geeze, he could sing outside my window all day, even if it was bad Rod Stewart. :D I hope Riley dies from food poisoning sometime soon. ((^:< ( |
 Song For A Rainy Day 2005-07-16 . chapter 2o o o o o h h h h h h h h!
Me likey! Very mucho! My only complaint is that the chapter wasn't longer, damn it. GIVE ME MORE WRITING! Twas fantastic. I especially liked how you hinted that Connie and Julie were "lucky they liked each other." Because usually they're best friends, la dee dah, the whole nine yards, cliche cliche cliche. This story is so neat, and I'm jealous of it. I want to know, damn it! I want to know if Rick's just being a prick (ha ha, I slay myself) or if there is some evil scheme behind it all.
INNER VOICE: EVIL SCHEME! EVIL SCHEME!
But that would KILL Connie's ego!
GUY: ((fan fare)) That's where *I* rush in!
Ew. Loser. Anyway, I also want to know what this evil scheme is, if there is one. Argh, I just can't wait -- period! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER, GIRLIES, OR I'LL SEND ETHAN HAWKE AFTER YOU!
ETHAN HAWKE: Durr ... :/
--chelsea |
 PrincessH 2005-07-16 . chapter 2Great story so far..Update soon |
 goblz 2005-07-16 . chapter 2Hey, great part! Nice to know Connie is having a hard time getting over Guy and that she would be willing to get back together with him. Very interesting! What is Rick up to!! I'm intrigued, lol. Very interesting! |
 duckys 2005-07-15 . chapter 2very very much interesting chapter, scooter is heavily conflicted, and riley seems to be up to something , i like :) |
 Em 2005-06-25 . chapter 1 YES! *happy dances* You guys are writing together!! Do you have any idea how exciting this is for us poor, good story deprived, loyal readers?!?!? This chapter was so great, I'm so excited for chapter two!
*narrows eyes* Ew... Rick Riley... *pukes* Connie sweetie you're a bit delusional... dump him quickly and go for Guy! He's the cute one!!
*is so not a loser*
Update soon! |
 Francois Noir 2005-06-25 . chapter 1okay, so. i love it! especially this part:
"But he had found, as the days went by, that he missed Connie. He missed her terribly. He had dreams about her, and couldn’t help but noticing more than usual how pretty she was, and how her shirts and jeans fit her so perfectly. He tried to get over her, but he couldn’t. He still loved her. He was pretty sure she still felt the same way she always did, because she treated him the same way as she had always done, except she didn’t kiss him anymore."
i think that's so sad and so sweet and so guy to a t! you have his character *down* and it makes this such the better read for it.
and this was hilarious:
"..and Luis will be-"
"I'm Luis."
"Oh, right. Yeah, you'll be mad too,..."
oh man. seriously. that was right on. :D
and guy's "practically best friends" comment at the end was amazing, too. you guys are hot. comic genious. it's golden, ladies, golden i tell you.
what more could i ask from you guys than a connie/guy fic which isn't actually entirely a connie/guy fic? with lots of guy freaking out! and luis! adam! charlie! oh, ducks! i love it all. rick riley, too. this is a great start, you have such an interesting set-up, and with the two of you behind the pen...i can't imagine where this will all go. keep writing. :)
love,
quimby |
 Song For A Rainy Day 2005-06-25 . chapter 1Holy **. How can this be? Some real, actual, tolerable, humorous but not completely stupid, well-written Mighty Ducks fanfiction? ((rubs eyes))
I need a moment.
((ten minutes fly by))
I still don't believe it. I think I'm ready to cry! You guys rock. I severed all ties with my old account and the Mighty Ducks section when Quimby and everyone else sort of disappeared, and I realized that my writing was crap. But I did enjoy It's Summer in My Heart, even if I didn't review the last couple of chapters ... ((sad face))
But that won't happen this time, I assure you. I haven't seen some good Mighty Duck fanfiction in, well, one long time. I'm so excited for this. This is going on my favorites. I think I'll have to check back with the MD shizzit more frequently, just in case any other GOOD authors decide to come back.
This chapter was very funny. I have always enjoyed your guys' sense of humors. Cimmy, Goldfish -- YOU ROCK MY WORLD!
-Chelsea |
 goblz 2005-06-23 . chapter 1LOL! Great start on this. I hope this is Connie/Guy, but hey if it's not I'm flexible. I know you said it was, but I mean I hope they end up together.
The idea of Guy freaking out like that is hilarious. Brilliantly written, and I like the idea of him and Luis being roommates.
It's so nice to see GOOD Mighty Ducks fics here again! They're becoming very hard to find. |
 PrincessH 2005-06-23 . chapter 1Great...Update soon! |
 Graceful Fall 2005-06-23 . chapter 1Cimmy, Kristine, this is great! What will Guy do next? What will Connie's reaction be? What will Adam's role be? Dun, dun, DUN!
Really, great story, I can't wait to see more from you two. |
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