 Bluer Sky 2007-08-28 . chapter 5Oh my, I wouldn't want to have Sokka be (even more) sexist, would I?
Anyways...
I too, have a horrible feeling it was Iroh who committed the murder. But as I say, it's a horrible feeling, and I hope not.
I also hope you update soon-- You can't stop this fic before it even gets to the good part! From the five chapters I've read so far, you have a real gift. So yes, I'm begging you. And I almost never beg fanfic authors. That's how good this is. It's that good, and you haven't even reached the main characters yet. How messed up is that?
Update soon! |
 storm-of-insanity 2006-05-12 . chapter 5i have a horrible sucspision that iroh is the killer. it was the gingeng tea comment that brought it about.
you write with a lot of skill.well done |
 ZukoxKatara_Fan 2006-03-15 . chapter 5 awesome,write more! and more... and more... and more...and- |
 DarkRaven16 2006-01-27 . chapter 5 i tihnk its a good story besides that i want 2 know what happens! bey yas.
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my famous saying "make more to stories or they will haunt you" |
 Calicy 2006-01-16 . chapter 3It's good. But why did Prince Zuko put his intials on his mask? |
 arudisill 2006-01-10 . chapter 1 i think ur fanfiction was really good. it really sounds like it is wht really happened. |
 Jaden 2006-01-02 . chapter 5 I love your story so far can't wait for the next chapter! |
 ANIM3LOVA835 or just Emily 2006-01-01 . chapter 5 HI. NIce story! o the plot thickens. lol and I was wondering, the grandaughhter just was screaming right? Zula had just run into her teachers right? Anyway . . . how does everyone know that zuko's sister's name is zula? I WANT TO KNOWW! Anyway, keep on writing! |
 dragonlupine 2005-12-23 . chapter 5hey this is pretty good really good in fact...you sould be proud!this fic is indeed one of the best i've read in a long time,though the pace is a little to slow for me but i know that you're building up the plot so i will do everything in my power to be patient.please update soon! |
 Cala Akina Morushiku 2005-12-03 . chapter 4this is super. Zula is a pure brat, just the way we like her.
annA |
 anime-catdragon 2005-11-19 . chapter 5Ah, how I love sibling angst ^_^ yet I do not like siblings hating their siblings...spcecially between older brother little sisters...yes I'm aware that my beliefs are strange. LOL. I'm interested to see the interaction between Zuko and Zula, VERY interested. I really don't want Zula's hatred for him to be either of their downfalls however, and though I will not tell you how to write your story, I will say this; it might prove to be interesting if you twist her feelings around, maybe make her re-think her hatred for her brother. I believe it might make this already awesome fic even better, and I must say, I DO love twists ^_^ but that is only my hope and suggestion, it is in no way me trying to influence your story. I will read no matter what happens. Even if Zaoh does not die...*grumbles* how I loath him...but I've rambled long enough, please please PLEASE update soon!
~AC |
 Patience Halliwell 2005-10-14 . chapter 5HEy, that wasn't half bad. I actually liked it. you should probably have the regular characters come out soon. Maybe have a little Katara/Zuko if Zuko decides to capture Katara. I'll let you decide. Cya. |
 The Last Female Firebender 2005-09-22 . chapter 2 Actually, Aang said his old friend from the Fire Nation was named Kuzon. How did you get "Jiro" out of that? |
 Arekisu 2005-09-12 . chapter 5ZULA IS SO EVIL! -falls over- I LOVES HER EVILNESS! -maniacal cackle- Evil is god.
As always, wonderful wonderful wonderful. ^__^ I love your descriptions of people and places, and the way Zula addresses Ozai (and of Ozai in general. "If an heir cannot fullfill his obligations, he has no choice but to pass his crown to the next person in royalty. Be that as it may, you are and foremost a woman. And women have a no place as rulers of a nation." SO OZAI), it makes your writing so great to read! -points to self- Coming from a person who writes mostly in dialogue because snide comments are fun. I can't write serious. You can. -thumbs up-
I'm in love with this story. I likes it better than Sweet Revenge! GASP! -poke- Your writing has definitely improved since SR. I'm loving this. (I love the Fire Nation, and all scenes involving the Fire Nation kick **.) Also, I'm glad that you're open to other pairings besides K/Z, as you said in your author's note. I can't stand K/Z personally. I'll only read it if the author is good. >__< I don't like them together, and, there's so much of it floating around these days...
I'm going to go read "LOTR: The Fellowship of the Ring" now. -falls asleep- But I would like to make it known that I would MUCH rather be reading this fic. So update soon! Please? -holds up LOTR book- Don't make me suffer through this without an update!! |
 Junkfood 2005-09-08 . chapter 5 some day i shall log in to review... anyways great chapter a certain admiral eh? Hm i wonder who that might be (note the hint of sarcasium in voice)... Update asap... and I have helped Sokka and his sexisum! |