This story is insanely original!! I'm in love with it!

love it

It's very sad that you haven't written more... Here's to hoping that you will eventually! Even though you haven't updated in a year... *sigh* I can dream, can't I?

Interesting... I wonder how Hermione is going to convince Snape to give her back her sight. I like your story and I think that you should continue writing it.

Very good plot so far. I enjoy the idea and hope you continue to write.

An interesting way to motivate Hermione to find Snape.

Thank you and goodluck

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Please update soon!

So here we are again been wat almost 2 years since i heard from you last i guess it is too much trouble to keep in touch with me or is it you dont dare cos you know i ** off at you? And wat is happening with your stories boy? seriously stop thinking them up at work they are getting worse but you should continue twisting the knife its bloody brilliant.hope you sis is good tell her i said hi.

RAELLY GOOD!
CONTINUE!

Those negotiations were just...beautiful (wipes tear of admiration). The idea of Hermione in Slytherin is frightening, to say the least, but it would be fun in its own exciting way. This is just as good, if not better, because so many people have illusions about those sorted to Gryffindor that Hermione can hide behind. Snicker.

Lovely chapter, really.

Cool chapter! Good, evil!Hermione, and I like that. I also like Draco's return shot over the books.

I look forward to Narcissa vs. Hermione. This should be fun.

Cool story. Like the way you are using the godparent rituals.

terrific job~!

Wow. That's all I really have to say. Hermione is so bitter and cunning! Not completely OOC, but different to what everyone's used to. This is brilliant, please keep going.

Well, I really did like this chapter. Narcissa is rather perceptive isn't she? Will you reveal who it was that taught Narcissa to look for the signs? Also, I was quite amused that Severus knew that it was Hermione under the cloak. Bravo! Keep up the good work!