Reviews for The Interloper

Reviews For: The Interloper

Bovine Beauty 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseWhy haven't you uploaded on this story. I think it's wonderful. And I'm suddenly wondering what these mysterious bugs want with Flik.
TOONSRULE 2008-01-27 ch 3,	abusePLEASE WRITE AGAIN!
Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-08-11 ch 3,	abuse:) I liked it! Very creative, I really want to read more. ^_^ Please update soon.
jla2snoopy 2006-08-10 ch 3,	abusehello! i just discovered your story and i really like it! i noticed that you haven't updated in a long time though. i really hope you continue!! you've got some great ideas here (i.e. the hornets) and some mysteries that have been left unsolved! please update!
BlackAerin 2006-05-19 ch 3,	abusethis is serious work... a very believable piece of work that can actually be seen as part of the Bug's Life universe... I am quite amazed at all the details and the intense plot that you have constructed, while at the same time keeping the characters in character... I can imagine Flick, Atta, and the rest reacting and acting just as you have them portrayed here... a very admirable feat... now i'm all wondering what on earth are the hornets going to do? why do they want flick? and where on earth are the circus bugs?! I hope that you update soon, as I am now officially loving this! Love and Huggles! =^-^= Rini chan
crazylittlecheezer 2006-02-18 ch 3,	abuseI really like this story! I hope you decide to continue it! It is very well done and you seem to be quite the talented writer! ^_^
Cherry 2006-01-07 ch 3, anon.	abuseLove it! Please make more soon!
LadyMyuu 2006-01-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseFINALLY! A BUGS LIFE FIC THAT MAKES SENSE TO ME. ;; I wub it. very good, I love your style, not over doing it yet keeping in addicted. I love the idea with the hornets and its all well thought out. I'll be poking around...
Atraiyu 2005-11-26 ch 3,	abuseOkay okay... so I'm breaking down and reviewing before it's done. But that's because it's REALLY GOOD. Totally. I love the descriptions of the hornet society... it really is believable. Update soon, amigo!
Barguest 2005-07-23 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is really great, I would love to see the next chapter. The plot is interesting and the characters are all IC.
g 2005-07-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseInteresting, please do continue. Ah...the suspense...
Perosha 2005-06-26 ch 2,	abuseYou're doing a flippin' awesome job here; I'm loving this, and I'm not even an ant fan. :-) My only suggestion for improvement is the thing about the boulder being five millimeters across; the proportions in ABL are really weird, and bugs are a lot bigger than they ought to be. For a quantitative example of the scale, look at this image here and check the measurements: [ (If that link doesn't come out right in the review, it's in the concept art gallery at TSC; it's of the mariachi band instruments.) The boulder would have to be way bigger than just five millimeters for the ants to have trouble with it; it wouldn't even be a boulder at that size, I think. Like I said, the proportions are a bit wacky. Other than that, fantastic job. I really want to know what happens next. :D

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