lol. Kingdom Hearts hamsters is a nice song to listen to while reading this. XD

heh eh eh. Meta Knight got his butt kicked!

lolz.

lol. I've already read this. So I know what's going to happen. lol! I can't wawit to read it! XD

I can't really laugh though cuz my dad is like, sitting in the living room with me.

lol. I like reading reading this. It's a wonderful story. But you have to continue soon! i have NOTHING to do but read fanfics! XO

And none of them update! wah! :tears:

This is one of the greatest fanfic I have ever read. You are an amazing author.

I read this story quite a while ago. Two years ago, I think it was. And even now just thinking about it makes me feel like crying!

I decided to read over it again, and well, I'm having a hard time stopping myself from crying again. XD;

This is, without a doubt, the best fanfic in the Kirby section to date, and possibly one of the best fanfics I've ever read in general.

It's true to the anime, the characters are exactly as they should be, and incredibly well written. I can clearly imagine them acting out the scenes.

You've done a wonderful job. _

This story is beautifully written and very exciting. A little gory with spiritual stuff near the end. I loved the ending; please write the sequel soon!

Damn...I was crying after that too.

Best. Fanfic. Ever. I wish everyone could write like this...including myself. Unfortunately I cannot. I'll just have to read your other fanfics instead. D

Blah. Your site not being up is making me mad when I keep trying to get to the links you put in there.

I am literally bawling my eyes out after reading this... *sniff*

I just finished reading this story, Ivyna. I was quite sad by the ending.

(SPOILER)

Espeically with the very sudden death of Meta Knight. I was shocked, and kept on thinking to myself "He's going to live, he's going to live.", even after it was quite obvisous he was dead. Although, it was pretty cool how Meta Knight is reborn as Menei at the end.

(END OF SPOILER)

I guess all I can do is thank you, Ivyna J. Spyder, for yet another entertaining story. As I said before, you are a excellent writer. Perhaps I'll read another one of you stories soon.

NOTE: I did find it kinda strange how Knuckle Joe doesn't go and see Gardell at the end of this story. I don't think that'd be quite something one would forget about, but whatever. I was quite surprised at how small Gardell's role in the story was as well. I was kinda hoping he'd help Meta Knight more than he actullay did, but it was still cool that he made a role.

ANOTHER NOTE: What was up with Knuckle Joe when he thought he reconized Sword without his helmet on? Could he be Gardell's earlier love (I'm sorry, I don't remember his name, but I'm sure you know what I'm talking)? You didn't seem to develop this very far, so this leaves me very curious about Sword in your fiction. In case you don't remember it, I'll place the couple of sentences relating to this scene here:

Joe didn’t say anything, staring at him. Pale blue-gray skin, deep blue hair- lighter than his… And two ridged ebony horns on the back of his head. “You look like him…”

“Huh?” Sword looked confused. “Like who?”

“N-Nothing,” Joe said quickly. But even aside from that he knew he’d seen Sword’s face before… but where? “Heh, I guess that explains why you wear that weird helmet…”

I guess I'll stop pestering you with my thoughts. I'll see you later. (disappears)

Before I continue reading, I must say to you, thank you. Your advice really did help. Since I don't have access to Kirby anime (Is there a Manga form? Please tell me if there is.), I had to go solely by the American version. Anyways, I took your advice, slowed down, described everything a bit more, did what you said, mostly. Not to mention you reminded me to put up a notice that my fic is AU. Not much off from the real thing, but AU. So, Ivyna, without further adieu, welcome to my faves list!

Guess who's back, back again... I couldn't help it! This was the most amazing Kirby story ever. Action, adventure, good old-fashioned violence, supernatural occurences, and Kirby being cute. I wish it were a movie... but hey, I'll settle for the picture. Two Destrayar-sized thumbs up. Eagerly awaiting the sequel.

Another short summary of my feelings: WOAH. The final fight scenes were fantastic. And the death scenes, too -I just knew somebody was going to get it. Kind of ironic, Kirby finished Yamikage like most of the other Majuu he fought. And MK... well, he lived a good life.

My feelings about this chapter can be summed up pretty neatly: It made me squirm like nobody's business.

Oh, Laser ability was in this chapter! Too bad it didn't last very long. It seems that everybody's disabled and/or incapacitated in some way, and MK is truly in trouble. Awesome fight scene beforehand. (Aww, they took his mask.) "Do whatever you have to" is usually a bad sign coming from a bad guy. Yup, I think it's officially hit the fan now. Kirby, wake up!