you are a very talented writer! i really wish you would continue updating this story. it seemed a little disjointed at times, but for the most part it was beautifully written and interesting.

Black Pit of Despair was great. I think so far it was my favorite chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

*claps* Great as usual.

This is so cool!

I love this! Good job! :)

And add more soon.

AW! *smiles* I love this collection! I'm so happy you updated!

The conversation between Jet and Spike never ceased to amaze me. It's just so...Jet and Spike. I've always loved the way they sort of refer to Faye like a child. Almost like two parents discussing the welfare of a kid in another room or something of the like. The beginning was also great where you spoke about how she had the two images. The word-play tripped me up a bit but I think you have a knack of saying exactly what you want to, where you want to so the wording only adds to the perfection. Good job (hopefully I haven't completely bored you).

you're back! and i like where you're going with this. please do continue.

Easy to read, I appreciate. Keep updating!

Wow great! Fabulous! That was fantastic!

Wow, this is pretty good... I love your manner of description, you speak in Faye's voice perfectly, with all the right familiarity. Good job.

-J

I never tried to clear my head with coffee despite how I love both drinks.
really enjoied reading and I like how you didn t tell if Spike was a hallucination or not.

One word: huh. Good story otherwise, though. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina

Very nice. Threw me off when I got to the end and I had to go back and start over. Hehe

Hmm. Interesting. I wasn't sure if this was post-series or not, but either way, I liked it. I especially liked the part about what happened with Ed and Jet, being adoptive family. That was a nice touch. Good job!