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euphoria6a 8/2/06 . chapter 1
Aww...sorry again that I did not review this story! I read this long ago when i had no account but now that I can review it, I want 2 say that is was so good, well written, and creative! It made me feel so sad at the end...well, bye bye!
Sheila 3/25/04 . chapter 3
(giggles) Looks like I was able to read it all today, I love your BR 1 series and how you had Kenji writing his daily doings in a journal. That was very creative and I enjoyed every part of this fic. As usual you've done an excellent job! The more I read your stories the more I learn about writing, what do you mean about Hans going loony?
Sheila 3/25/04 . chapter 2
This chapter was really good! I love it... aw, Kenji and Uriko cuddling (sniffles) sweet puppy love going on but poor Kenji, he's so alone... I can relate to him totally. I'm gonna print CH. 3 today so I can review tommorrow .
Sheila 3/25/04 . chapter 1
Wow! This chapter was soo cute... hmm, now you gave me some ideas for the Keniko fic me and Nick is working on... which name sounds better for the title, "Ange of mine" or "Wings of an angel" ? O_o Busuzima and Hans... ACK! (shudders) I printed CH. 2 today so I'll be reading it in my 5th period class today . I love your writing.
AmaDono 3/20/03 . chapter 3
Teehee. It's a cute story, but so sad. Poor Kenji. (Well, actually, I'm a Fox fan, and possible the only perfectly straight girl to admit it.) Love your work! *thumbs up*
NeoDragonZero 1/13/03 . chapter 3
and thus it begins...

Riko's gone, they've all left him, and he's all alone with 'Boozuzeema'. (Ahhhh! must kill evil genetic freaky scientist man with crazy green hair! DIE EVIL PSYCHOPATH DIE! *sound of 12-gauge can be heard*) but anyway, back to the subject at hand... *chirp chirp* umm... *gets whacked with 2x4* owww! x.o;;; dont make me come after u!

now, since ive gotten the sense beaten into me once again... it was cool that everybody came into Tylon and tried to rescue everyone. Mitsuko came too! haha, i almost forgot about her! almost everyone was there, except the original Bakuryu (bastard old guy, i dont really remember him much..). possibly the cameo of Kohryu? so many possibilities... and now the beginning of a legacy of death, slaughter, banter, and ahh yes... the deathly words of the delicate and deadly assassin: Bakuryu. i hope Riko watches out now, cuz we all know wat happens next...

an excellent fic. the day seperation and strikeout, along with mis-spelling and emotions felt during the whole trilogy as a whole, and not to mention the Keniko, made this a worthwhile read that is not found often. the ending is left somewhat satisfying to the palette, but it also leaves us with wanting more. this type of cliffhanger cannot be accomplished easily, as it combines both satisfaction with the feeling of wanting more, a combination not easily achieved.

you have sewn together a masterpiece that flows quite nicely on the tongue and mind, giving us the chance to look into the mind of a boy that we only knew as Kenji Ohgami and Bakuryu. this further insight gives us a better look at what Hudson might have been looking to achieve originally, and i commend you for your excellent piece of work.

*shakes hands heartily then salutes*

once again, excellent job.
NeoDragonZero 1/13/03 . chapter 2
again, very nice. its nice to see that Uriko (now Riko) and Kenji are gettin along quite nicely, and funny to see him saying that she has him fix things. the snuggling scene was a nice touch too (gathering warmth from each other, awww... ) "fighting fighting fighting" ahh yes, no one likes fighting that much, or training that much. it was sad to see that Alica died trying to get them out of Tylon... aww... ( its cool to see him progressing in his fighting techs, but its also kinda frightening to know that Riko is transforming into her other beast form (the big red evil monster thing that was such a pain to beat with anyone but Yugo for me! Ahhh die evil monster!) *acheem* very good so far, but i hope that Riko gets back to normal, though im sorry for Greg, Yugo and whoever else that got into her way... great again, gotta check the 3rd now!
NeoDragonZero 1/13/03 . chapter 1
excellent perspective. adding the strikeout effect was a very creative and excellent touch, showing that you've put a lot into this fic. i like how he doesn't really know wat's goin on, and how he's confused as to wat they'll do to him. having Uriko in there was good too, giving friendship to loneliness. im sure that this is going to be good, and (although its already done) im sure to have a good time readin the next section! great goin! *salutes*
Fle 9/18/01 . chapter 2
Thats such a sad ending!
Alexandra Riot 8/30/01 . chapter 3
Poor Kenji...he was hurt all of those years...But I still like him...(blush) tee-hee...Kenji is sooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuute!
Grimrist 7/11/01 . chapter 3
Hmmm, interesting fan-fic. However, a bit overdone on Kenji's attitude. I doubt a young boy would be that optimistic under such...circumstances. A commendable work of literature nonetheless.
Meg-Chan 5/5/01 . chapter 3
Hey! I really like your story and it seems like a good idea to start a journal from 15-year-old Kenji's point of view. How come hardly anyone writes about Long and Shina (everyone that writes calls her Jane) And is there a BL3?
Psycho Guyver 4/16/01 . chapter 3
I love the Busuzima Bashing! Poor Kenji and Uriko...hmm..they are so cute together. Too bad Tylon keeps getting in the way. Oh well they later did end up together. Heheh, they are after all too cute together and praticly ment for each other. Let's see what heppens in the next edition to this cool fic...
alica tylon 4/13/01 . chapter 3
WOW! an exciting ending! Yeah, defently do one! this was a veyr good series. please do more!
Deoku 4/13/01 . chapter 3
I love this section of the triology the most! It's definitly my favorite so far! The action in this one is what I enjoy the most! Poor Uriko, had to go through all of that, because of Busu- what's his name! That jerk is going to get it in one of fics! Kenji had to watch on almost helplessly. I know he didn't like that at all. Then he was left behind, not intentionally, but you can understand my sympathy! It was nice to see the rest of the BR crew stop by though! The ending was really sad. Damn Busu-bastard! Anyway, it was a great triology Christi! I can't wait for the new BR3 fic to get started!_
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