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| Bagge 2005-11-22 ch 1,  | abuseAw. Perfection is possible, also in fics. This one is sweet, and a bit sad. A calm, silent relationship without big gestures. Good writing |
| Sheryl 2005-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWo! that was awesome! On the 7th para 2nd word, u made a typo. "She stares" not "she stars" And instead of saying 'easy'in the 7th para, why not say 'simple' it just might add a little bit. The words were well written, but if you could improve your vocabulary a bit. it would be terrific. I work for a company for young writters to show their work. and I think that this piece of work would fit well. Please email me, it would be a pitty, if we lost you talent. Cheers, Shery |
| Those Who Matter Don't Mind 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Goodness. This has got to be, the. Most. Beautiful and thoughtful fanfic I've seen recently. |
| Watermelon Wishes 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat job, as always =) Even though I knew the "he" is Harry since you told me, I might not have been able to figure that out if you hadn't since he wasn't described enough. Luna was described perfectly, though. Other than that, excellent! |
| Milky 2005-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell it can't be Ron I guess.. :P But it's a really wonderful story. I wish I can write like you. :) |
| emwonkuod 2005-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abusei like ur story! omg, it's so cute! |
| xXkraziefaerieXx 2005-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseits so beautiful...i love the fact that its perfection that is the main thing in this story...because the word "perfection" holds such a meaning of beauty, hate, mysterious...i really love this fan fic... |
| WonderfullyMade5 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abusewho the hell is the guy? harry or ron? it's pretty though! |