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| Silkwind 2006-10-13 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the story, Are you going to continue with it? It could be interesting, some thing different |
| FaintlyAlarming 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseEpp!! Yay-ish!! |
| Anna 2005-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the new plot and i can't wait for an update... please hurry! |
| Ewanlover64 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseVery good...I'm interested in how you are going to get the two together. |
| The Chanster 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI love your new plot very good, I just hope you post more chapters soon. |
| atoz 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it and find this plot line to be much more interesting than the first one you attempted to write. Keep writing! I'm anxious to see the progression of the relationship between Carth and Revan. |
| LuvsDelkoSpeed 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Give us more. |
| Java Bee 2005-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey you! ;) I'm really liking this new story of events. I think it moves along at a good pace. Keep up the good work, JediRevan! And uh...here is a Carth plushie...to help rid you of the writer's block syndrome. ::hands plushie:: rawr! |
| Sinjinn 2005-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood stuff! I liked the other one, but this one has me intrigued. One thing I'd love to see is some sort of marker or indicator that you're switching from one scene to another. Like where she thinks she doesn't know if she should ask Carth to help her, and then we're with Carth in the hangar bay all of a sudden. Just some spaces or *s, or ~s, or something to give a little visual break. Hope that makes sense. Other than that, I'm hooked and anxiously waiting for more! |
| Revan's Pet Duck 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseMuaha! I'm liking the new plotline. XD Post more soon! |
| The Lady Revan 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet! I'm going to say right now, that the orignal story line was good and I don't think that until I read more I'm going to compare it just yet, but both where good and I like this chapter as well. Um, I just noticed this, going back over the chapter, but it seemed kind of set at a fast pace, so I'm hoping that chapter 2 will be out soon, cause with the current pace, it's going to need more fast, hey? So let's just sit back and see where this goes, then, hey? lol - In other words, write more - like it very much! |