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| Rashaka 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis is terrible, but amazing because its so terrible. It makes my heart hurt for a fictional character, and it just... it's so sad and dark and terrible. The last scene is the best/worst, and at first I wasn't sure why you had something after the Temari scene, but this was an even stronger, darker ending. To know that his friends tried to stop him but that he had so methodically planned for it anyway. The reasoning you give here, the way the Naras are utilized... it makes so much sense. It's horrid to imagine, but it makes sense. And I feel so sorry for his parents, too... (although one imagines that if they'd ever talked to him frankly about it, this whole situation could have been avoided.) Anyway, a powerful read and I commend you for really going for it. |
| bellzooks 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. I really don't know what else to say about it... heartbreaking, and amazing. |
| RedBrunja 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. God. I have no words. |
| Katako-Chan 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's...scary. Absolutely wonderful, but also really scary. This is a really nice introspective piece-thingy! Good job! Katako-Chan |
| NocturnalFerri 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was stunning. So sad and morbid...but beautiful. Very nice play on shadows and your characters are on point. Though, I kinda hope this isnt what goes on in Shikamaru's head. Good work on digging into the dark grit that is ANBU. It isn't a nice tattoo, mask and S-rank missions as it usually gets potrayed to be, but something much darker. Great work, and keep on writing!! |
| MKofGod 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseSo sad... Sigh... I can't see Shikamaru killing Kankouro... but I can definately see him doing everything else. Wonderful job, even if did make me feel like crying. |
| .Gabby-chan182. 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseFlippin' mother of the chili O.o That was aw3som3!!^^ I loved your summary and heck yeah, I loved your story. Shikamaru's little stunt was... shadowy, lol =3 -Gabs. |
| Haruka-Hime 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseDarkly Beautiful |
| Winter-Rae 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI was in complete awe as I read this. All I could say after I was done was 'Wow' over and over again. This was amazingly written, everything about it was spectacular! There's really not enough words for me to say how beautiful this was. My God, I'm just in total shock. I mean...you are so talented! Well before I babble on anymore. Just know that I loved this very much. A great insight into a great character. Keep up the lovely work. Winter-Rae xoxo |
| Shika.Tot 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. Beautiful. Great job. |
| InosBane 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat an amazing story. Simply brilliant! Tragic, but beautiful and brilliant. You captured him so well! |
| Paosheep 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThis... Lovely. Good job. |
| GoldenRat 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is one scary/freaky fic. I always thought Shikamaru would be one of the ones who would survive being a ninja. |
| Tsiuq 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseso beautifully... grotesque. |
| TheSweetest. . . 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely adore this fic. It is written in a way that.. I really lack words. Wow. This is truly a masterpiece. |