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me 9/21/06 . chapter 1
PLEASE UPDATE
SiriusFan 8/18/06 . chapter 1
I love it! I totally see this story going far...please UPDATE SOON!
me 8/13/06 . chapter 1
please do continue..!
the.gold.in.the.shadow 5/27/06 . chapter 1
this is great! please update soon!
zuska1985 1/7/06 . chapter 1
Another truely great story! Why did you stop? You shouldn't have... Writers' block?
Jamie 8/2/05 . chapter 1
You've had over a month so PLEASE update! You're story is pretty good, but you had one mistake.

'She was a muggle from a small town' Lily is muggle born, but not a muggle herself. Otherwise, great job! UPDATE SOON.Bye.
Jessiquie 7/6/05 . chapter 1
omg, thats heaps good and extrememly interesting, l like the conflict, please update soon
4theoneandonly 6/30/05 . chapter 1
I... LOVE it! *4theoneandonly*
samanthablack899 6/28/05 . chapter 1
oh my goodness! So good

I havent reviewed any of your chapters for quite a while Sacha... so I'm sorry!

But im still reading and they are GREAT!
stargoddess127 6/25/05 . chapter 1
okay, seriously...is it even possible for me to dislike any of your stories! i always LOVE reading you stories! no overexaggeration there! i love your vocabulary and just the way you descirbe things! so happy you've got another story out. it'll give me something to look forward to as i work
gabriela 6/24/05 . chapter 1
m well its a nice start but isnt a little bit to quick for lily or james to be president and vice? m hope you update soon...just one more thing I know I amnt a writer or anything..just a girl trying her best...please try to make lily and james human, I mean make them imperfect...not the best looking, with a scar or acne I dont know... something like that...I mean not the fairy tale..I know know that the goodies but make it a little bit real..thanks for writting good luck
Anna 6/24/05 . chapter 1
Brilliant! I can't wait for all the arguements! Please update soon. Love Anna.

(I'm assuming a different Anna to the one that you know!)
KMK 6/24/05 . chapter 1
Not bad, I can't wait for the next story, or the next chapter! Update soon.

Kristin
Lillian 6/24/05 . chapter 1
Great chapter. post more soon
greengrl 6/24/05 . chapter 1
great start.

xoxox
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