 Sable Fennec 4/2/04 . chapter 3omg! i adore this fic! you so can't leave it abandoned for much longer. i think i'll go crazy from the anxiety. _
your characterizations are simply awesome. (yes, i'm a complete and shameless Asher fan. and, of course, Methos isn't hurting any. _) i'm not quite as familiar with X-men, as I don't watch much TV, but i've always like Jubilee. and even though i know next to nothing about Creed, he still manages to be quite three dimensional. in fact, i think your characters qualify as four dimensional.
and congrats at the coolness that is Kora! i've rarely seen a more engaging and empathizing OC. i'm totally jealous of your ability to make things flow.
also, lack of plot is a plus in my opinion. (not that i have any idea if you're going somewhere...*sweatdrop* ) if it's writer's block that you're suffering from, then i'd suggest rereading the last few chapters and then just write whatever you feel like. personally, i think plot is optional. i really prefer characterization pieces to plot-erific ones, since, in my opinion, they're harder to pull off (though much easier to orchestrate and balance).
sorry about my babble. good fics turn me into a rabid, bouncing rabbit. _;
please please pleaase update! or at least talk to be about random stuff. IM kenshinkoi . i bounce ideas for lots of people, and would love to beta if you needed one. i've glanced at your other fics and i'm very familiar with all the fandoms. (*sheepish closet HP fanatic*) last note about me-i'm an admitted slasher who forays into gen. i, however, have to hate of het, and am often found to be reading plotless sappy romances and political intrigue-filled angst death fics. so basically, i'm open on all fronts. i'm a nonjudgemental person by nature, so please don't be afraid to talk to me!
okay, my essay's done. sorry about my lack of correct grammar and punctuation (i'm usually a stickler for both), but it's a Friday, i have a week-long vacation the week after next, and i'm exhausted. once again, awesome job!
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Chel-chan |
 Tinka 7/13/03 . chapter 3 Ah, still love this story. I've read it before about a year or so ago and was hoping there'd be more to it. Oh well, one can always hope. If I'll come to see this again in a year, will there be more? |