This is fantastic -- I've loved every minute :D
But please, miss, may I have some more? ;]
(Especially some more Obi/Sabe

Years ago (was it really six, seven years?!), I was a teenager head-over-heels for your Sabé trilogy - it was almost a bit frightening just how much I latched onto it. Now, being no longer a teenager and a bit more level-headed in the romance department, I was intrigued when I came upon this story in a moment of Google-searching boredom. Who knew that I'd once again be crippled of doing anything else but reading my computer screen?

At the Council Forums, you claimed that this story was not a romance. While there is no outright mush, I think you've accomplished something much deeper by skirting around that. This was supposed to be an AU, but the way I've read it, you've kept the character quite canon. As much as I love the O/S pairing, it didn't seem plausible in light of Obi-Wan's fidelity to the Jedi Order. I am not debasing your previous trilogy, as there's no way I could ever rid myself of it (if I wanted to), but this more recent spin on the saga seems more mature, if you will. The tension is lovely, and the lack of resolution is much more fulfilling than any moment of weakness that could be exploited in from characters. Other fanfiction writers are rendered infantile by your writing, and I've found it useless to try and fill that desire for good fics by reading anything else. So congratulations, particuarly on picking up this story again and writing over a three-year period! I do hope you continue, as it's a pleasure to find new works by you, but as DRL so often intervenes, it's understandable. So thank you for the "new" story and the wonderful blast from the past.

I love this story wish you would finish it

Great story, I think you deserve more reviews than you have. Your writing is excellent. I believe that you should try hand at writing fiction to see how it would turn out. I haven't read much SW fan fiction, but your Sabe is a good one. I also think that Obi- Wan and Yoda are good also. Keep up the good work.


PapaMidNite

First, let me say I can't believe I somehow overlooked this story. I admire your other stuff a LOT and I just somehow didn't know this one existed until a few days ago. I LOVE how original an idea you implemented--your plotline is fantastic and I really think it's a great treatment of the characters and and your characterizations are spot on!

I don't really know where to begin, but I have to say you have a knack for conveying mountains of information in just a few lines. Your descriptions are perfect and make me, as a writer, so jealous. You've got such a knack for really conveying the way characters are feeling, conveying, and thinking all at the same time, while keeping us informed about the surroundings and setting, too.

Your Sabe is amazing. Confliced, deep, layers and layers of personality and sublety. Strong yet also deeply affected and used. Your Obi-Wan is perfect--kind, caring, sarcastic and decisive. And what's more, it works so well, the two of them. I am really enjoying (in a sadistic way, I suppose) the tension and conflict between them--but at the same time, I want to know that Obi-Wan meant Sabe when he told Anakin he HAD been in love... and I want Sabe to know it too. I hope he meant Sabe!

Your portrayal of Padme and Anakin is also great. I like their contrast to Sabe and Obi-Wan. I know a lot of fan fic casts Padme and Sabe as being BFFs forever, but I don't find that believable. I think they are both so fiercely independant that they would clash as they do in your story.

Masterful, just great! I cannot fully articulate my love for this story--I couldn't stop reading. I literally raced home from work tonight to continue to chapter 19!

PLEASE continue--I am looking forward much more than I should admit ;) you have power over me!!

Oh I do so hope you add more soon!! I'm hopelessly addicted and so want more!! LOVE IT

Awesome story!! I love it so far!! Please keep writing... I love the flashbacks, and you portray Sabe so well! Update soon, please! :)

master yoda is an animal

Interesting. I was confused by the switching back and forth between flashbacks and reality; you should delineate those better. Otherwise, good story. I, of course, want to find out what happens to Anakin.

I hope you continue - this is good. :)

I have just one word to say this story: wow. Your writing is so impeccable, I'm really not lying when I say this is simply one of the best fics I've ever read on here. It really is just amazing. I do hope you haven't abandoned this story because its so good, and there are just so many ways this story can end up, and ah, I just want to keep reading!

Please update soon!

Great chapter! Hate Amidala and Ani but love the whole drama surrounding Obi and Sabe. An what an ** Yoda is being he's going to let his padawen be killed.

You have to update really soon becuase I just got to no what happens!

I love, love, LOVE this fic, everything about it is perfectly addictive; the storyline, the tone, your writing, your portrayal of the characters. Definitely going on my favourites list. I hope you haven't abandoned it and I can't wait to read more!

Hello...I'm actually fairly new to reading Sabe/Obi-Wan fic, but I wanted to tell you that I've read several of your stories on other sites and have really enjoyed them. This one has me very intrigued and I can't wait until you update next.

You write Sabe's angst very well...you can almost feel her pain as you read the words.

All in all, you are a wonderful write. Please keep up the great work.

Well, that dream sequence at the start threw me. I've never been all that good at them, but this one was good and creepy. Nice touch.
The Padme/Sabe conversation; Ouch. Just ouch. I could feel it in my bones >_< . You are really skilled at making the feelings jump right off the page.
As for the Obi/Sabe moments, a lot of folks have been pushing for more. I love the subtlety. Not that I don't always root for them to go all kissy-face, but there is so much more in a romance when a writer takes the time and builds a solid history.
Geez. Usually I can get a feel for where a story is going, but I really don't have a clue how this story will resolve. Looking forward to your next update!