 zoner04 2008-10-05 . chapter 1that was so good. Hr/G |
 Mione of Ravenclaw 2008-07-19 . chapter 1I loved this oneshot. I like that you use alternating perspectives and the repetition is very effective here. You capture thier characters perfectly. Great job! |
 AlinaLotus 2008-03-11 . chapter 1Just lovely! A wonderful reminder why I ship Hr/G. |
 uluvme 2008-02-23 . chapter 1cute and sweet. nice oneshot. |
 Teddy.in.a.nutshell 2007-10-16 . chapter 1This is incredibly well written. I really like the story and the concept anyway, but it is really a beautiful piece! |
 E. E. Kelly 2007-04-22 . chapter 1Let me simply say, wow. It begins with such a lazy kind of feel, perfectly appropriate for a hot summer day, and the sensuality builds and builds until finally it bursts like the flavor of cherries in your mouth. I adored this. |
 totemo 2007-04-06 . chapter 1That was so cute! Really, it was just infused with Summer, and I loved it. It also exactly describes what I feel for a girl I know- so well that this is going onto my favourites list!
Thanks for that- you're an amzing writer.
totemo x |
 Friend 2007-03-26 . chapter 1 As a fellow writer, I'm thoroughly impressed by this story. The narrative is near flawless. The flow of the language makes the improbable events seem inevitable. There's a beautiful symmetry to the story, and repetition creates captivating patterns. The sex is sensuous and arousing but not smutty.
Truly wonderful. |
 IrinaWithAnI 2007-03-26 . chapter 1wow. that is beautifully written. |
 RahRahReplica 2007-02-15 . chapter 1Officially the only Hermione/Ginny fic I have deemed readable :D
Like the cherries. Cruel Intentions-esque. Slightly different meaning. |
 maxsgirl452 2006-09-13 . chapter 1Holy crap! That was amazing!
... Holy Crap! |
 Questioning Destiny 2006-07-19 . chapter 1Neat! this is so cute and adorable. |
 Yes-I-Am-An-Emo-Kid 2006-06-19 . chapter 1sexi |
 Ian's-Grace47 2006-06-04 . chapter 1oh how delightful. i love it..this pairing is sweet and beautiful and very hot. Though at times i think i may be slightly perverted enjoying the love and sexual relationship between 2 teenage girls, but when its conveyed as emotionally as this, i feel a bit more comfortable. |
 Shadow_Stabber 2006-04-05 . chapter 1 God. Seriously, I know you're a great writer, meandered over here for a short little pick-me-up... but that's just so sweet! Very good. I liked. Your writing style is very mature for your age. Keep up the good work! |