Your writing is so beautiful, It's almost ridiculous. The entire story is well written, and instead of giving a smutty vibe, it's more of a reassuring love, a beautiful vibe. I feel like I have just read something of importance, as if it is actually part of the books! Thanks for writing this.

...Wow. I absolutely loved it! It was amazing! :) Quite possibly one of the best Hermione/Ginny one-shots I've ever read. Excellent. :D

Beautifully written, almost lyrical. Very well done! Thank you. More, please?

Wonderful writing, sweet story. Thanks for sharing]

Gotta love cherries ;)

Mmmmmm, I am so in the mood for some cherries right now. Amazing story.

I really enjoyed the way you described their thoughts. Great story!

Love this, adore this. I'm falling in love with this couple and your writing. Cheers - brilliant job.

that was so good. Hr/G

I loved this oneshot. I like that you use alternating perspectives and the repetition is very effective here. You capture thier characters perfectly. Great job!

Just lovely! A wonderful reminder why I ship Hr/G.

cute and sweet. nice oneshot.

This is incredibly well written. I really like the story and the concept anyway, but it is really a beautiful piece!

Let me simply say, wow. It begins with such a lazy kind of feel, perfectly appropriate for a hot summer day, and the sensuality builds and builds until finally it bursts like the flavor of cherries in your mouth. I adored this.

That was so cute! Really, it was just infused with Summer, and I loved it. It also exactly describes what I feel for a girl I know- so well that this is going onto my favourites list!

Thanks for that- you're an amzing writer.

totemo x

As a fellow writer, I'm thoroughly impressed by this story. The narrative is near flawless. The flow of the language makes the improbable events seem inevitable. There's a beautiful symmetry to the story, and repetition creates captivating patterns. The sex is sensuous and arousing but not smutty.

Truly wonderful.