that was so good. Hr/G

I loved this oneshot. I like that you use alternating perspectives and the repetition is very effective here. You capture thier characters perfectly. Great job!

Just lovely! A wonderful reminder why I ship Hr/G.

cute and sweet. nice oneshot.

This is incredibly well written. I really like the story and the concept anyway, but it is really a beautiful piece!

Let me simply say, wow. It begins with such a lazy kind of feel, perfectly appropriate for a hot summer day, and the sensuality builds and builds until finally it bursts like the flavor of cherries in your mouth. I adored this.

That was so cute! Really, it was just infused with Summer, and I loved it. It also exactly describes what I feel for a girl I know- so well that this is going onto my favourites list!

Thanks for that- you're an amzing writer.

totemo x

As a fellow writer, I'm thoroughly impressed by this story. The narrative is near flawless. The flow of the language makes the improbable events seem inevitable. There's a beautiful symmetry to the story, and repetition creates captivating patterns. The sex is sensuous and arousing but not smutty.

Truly wonderful.

wow. that is beautifully written.

Officially the only Hermione/Ginny fic I have deemed readable :D

Like the cherries. Cruel Intentions-esque. Slightly different meaning.

Holy crap! That was amazing!

... Holy Crap!

Neat! this is so cute and adorable.

sexi

oh how delightful. i love it..this pairing is sweet and beautiful and very hot. Though at times i think i may be slightly perverted enjoying the love and sexual relationship between 2 teenage girls, but when its conveyed as emotionally as this, i feel a bit more comfortable.

God. Seriously, I know you're a great writer, meandered over here for a short little pick-me-up... but that's just so sweet! Very good. I liked. Your writing style is very mature for your age. Keep up the good work!