Hey there!
This was so good! You've done such a great job here! :D

Wow, I love the imagery in this! So amazing and vivid. I could picture it all in my mind!

Awesome fic!

This is so good! i love it lots. You write really well

Woah...wicked. I love how you ended it the way you began (only w/Spinner instead of Marco). That was really good. Short and sweet.

. . . Wow. That was truly stunning. I'm not really a fan of sparco sadly but this one could be considered one of those great turning points lol. I mean there were just some lines that were truly inspired. Like "...he doesn’t need forgiveness and vows of friendship, but like he needs Marco..." You captured the overall feelings of urgency and desperation and comfort effortlessly.

Amazing job. =]

Hey Lady! very cute, I like. By the Way The 'Goddess' shout out was in chapter 3. And I look foward to the next chapter

Woah. Quite incredible. I really enjoyed it. It felt real.

Wow, very good. This was absolutely brilliant. I can't express in words how much I loved this. Great work!

Wow. Good way of explaining it.

That was very veryvery good I loved it and I am estatic to hear that you plan on starting Enchanted again I love that story keep up the excellent work

Aw write more stories soon. This one was so cute.

Once again, you've outdone yourself. I'm awed and amazed at the writing. Brava! Can't wait to see more from you, whether it's more like this or Enchanted.