that was really good i am impressed

Aww that was a good one too! Heh, I'm quite the Colloyd fan and I thought this was a cute account of what may have happend before the oracle. It's very belivable. You're quite good ^^

slight OOCness but I like it ^_^

Cute.

That was a cute, little one-shot. You should start zoning out in church with ToS on your mind more often. ^.~

Hmm hmm that's quite good. Very nicely done with a nice flow too. Good work.