|Reviews for Children of War|
| Beth 1/17/11 . chapter 15
I'm so glad I found this story. I'm completely caught up! I see it's been a long time since you've updated this one, and have been focused on other stories. Do you have any plans to continue? I hope so!
| silvershark1987 9/9/08 . chapter 15
Your story has gone real deep, but how far are you planning to take Duo and Felicia's relationship, will Wufei get jealous.
i love how you have Heero looking after a kid, he can use that childlike part of himself that has been crying out for attention to help raise Kade.
However i have noticed a few spelling and grammer mistakes that could take a looking at...of maybe get a beta.
Love the story, HOPE you UPDATE soon
| Minxie 7/20/07 . chapter 15
Whoa... I really thought you were gonna kill off Relena, there. I wonder what Heero's reaction will be after seeing Wufei saving her in the nick of time :).
Oh, and that last scene between Duo and Felicia was really good, too! I'm really liking this story, so far. It really feels like what a sequel to Gundam Wing probably would be like.
Will you be posting chapter 16 anytime soon? :) :) I can't wait to see it.
| Minxie 7/20/07 . chapter 12
Poor Duo! And poor Quatre! I hate seeing them all tortured and stuff. It's very distressing. I'm looking forward to seeing Duo keeping his promise of bombing the shit out of those guys... yeah hehee!
| Minxie 7/20/07 . chapter 11
"He would do the same for me."
Aw, I love the bond between the Gundam pilots :).
And that Dr. Karren is crepy!
| Minxie 7/19/07 . chapter 10
Holy crap, Treize is toying with people again, except this time from BEYOND THE GRAVE. Yeah, I'm freaked out :D. The guy was scary enough alive as it is.
| Minxie 7/18/07 . chapter 9
"But little did he know, Heero would be the last person to see Duo Maxwell."
Ai, you're making me nervous... Another great chapter, though. Even though it was kinda sad I really liked Duo's rant in this one.
| Minxie 7/18/07 . chapter 8
"Eat. Your. Cornflakes."
Lolz, that made my day.
| Minxie 7/17/07 . chapter 7
Ah, this is a good story :). You have a gift for prose and characterization, Ghost of the Dawn. I can't finish reading this tonight (gotta get up for work tomorrow morning, ugh) but I look forward to the rest of the existing chapters!
| Mousery 7/3/07 . chapter 15
I remember reading the first couple chapters or so of this forever ago, and then I lost the link. XD Wee, I found it aain, yay. :P
Nice story so far, keep up the good work. :D
| Meira Evenstar 6/12/07 . chapter 15
I've been spending the last few days reading this fic, and all I can say is OMG, Ghost! Please tell me you are still working on this story! I believe this has got to be your best story that you've got posted, and I love all your stories, so that's really saying something. I know you're busy with the Ronin stories, but please, please, please take some time to work on this one too! I love it! There are so few decent Gundam Wing fics of this calibre on this site. I love how you have written each character out and what they're dealing with in such detail. It's such an amazing story. So, please update this fic...please please!
| Deculture 4/27/07 . chapter 1
Love this story. It's had action, romance, comedy and a little bit of everything. The only complaint I have is that you may be spending too much time with trying to write about all the characters in too much detail. I don't think Heero gets enough attention since he is the main character. Overall, love the story and wish you'd write more!
| WishIWould 4/3/07 . chapter 15
Oh, wow. When I was in the 8th grade and first introduced to Gundam Wing, a friend of mine lent me her notebook with the first 13 chapters (the only ones available then) printed out in it, and I loved it! Whenever I think of Gundam Wing and how much I loved the characters and story, I always remembered "Children of War" and wished I could find it again (It was my first fan-fic to read, by the way). Now I'm a college freshman and I HAVE found it again - I can't believe it!
I'm so fond of this story and the way it renders each character. Your original characters fit in seamlessly with the ones from the manga/show, and their interactions are perfect.
It's weird - all these years I've been thinking of Felicia as "Wufei's Girl," but now I'm not sure! Why'd you have to go do that? lol.
So here I am, a fan for a good 4 or 5 years now - still anxiously awaiting updates!
| white-wings01 3/18/07 . chapter 14
Yahoo! I love this story, to bad its all but discontinued..T_T I realy wish you'd write some more Ghost-san but I know how it is. You're busy and sometimes the creative juice just dons't flow. Pitty though. Well, see ya around _
| mangoyummy 12/3/06 . chapter 5
I think this story is realy awesome and it's keeping me reading! But, I would take out the part about down syndrome in chapter 5. It could be a little offensive to some people. Not PC, you know? Keep writing! :)