UWa Lauren you write good drabbles. :D

THough you should start writing chapter stories.. (hint hint, nudge, nudge)

Anyways! Since I have now seen about 14 episodes of FMA I can finally read your fanfics, yay me!

I liked how you set this one up, switching from Ed to Al's thoughts and from question to answer. It was very smart.

Mooving on, I still think you should try a chapter story, make it original, okay?! I can help too :D

See you tomorrow! :D

P.S. A happy toe is a toe that knows where its home is (that was what it was... Right?)

now im getting used to a little incest but this is wrong they were 10 and 11 when their normal lives ended lets not make them lovers too

*sniff* Listening to this and Bratja at the same time is a lethal combination of tear-jerking depression. Dammit.

Very sweet.

*shivers* Alright. All -sorts- of points for almost making me cry.

Lovely stuff- the parallelism is -extremely- nice; I love the back-and-forth quality, the way that they talk about the same subjects without quite repeating what the other's said. Very poetic; I think that you could easily break this up into verse and not lose anything, if you wanted. *little hearts*

SOURHGDUF cute.

Repetatitivity or whatever it is is like... PART of the fanfic. YOU CAN'T REMOVE THE REPRETATIVITY. XD

LOVE IT. Especially the last sentence. It's all... perfect. And... FITTING. -dies-

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Aww, yay! Only criticism is that it was a little bit repetitive, but it was still very good. Made me feel all happy inside and like hugging Ed and Al until they explode! :D But that was very creative and well-written. I liked it a lot.

Sque!! It's so sweet!