Reviews for Do you Remember?

Reviews For: Do you Remember?

professor ren 2006-05-31 ch 1,	abuseUWa Lauren you write good drabbles. :D THough you should start writing chapter stories.. (hint hint, nudge, nudge) Anyways! Since I have now seen about 14 episodes of FMA I can finally read your fanfics, yay me! I liked how you set this one up, switching from Ed to Al's thoughts and from question to answer. It was very smart. Mooving on, I still think you should try a chapter story, make it original, okay?! I can help too :D See you tomorrow! :D P.S. A happy toe is a toe that knows where its home is (that was what it was... Right?)
cm34 2005-10-04 ch 1, anon.	abusenow im getting used to a little incest but this is wrong they were 10 and 11 when their normal lives ended lets not make them lovers too
Requiem of Silence 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abusesniff Listening to this and Bratja at the same time is a lethal combination of tear-jerking depression. Dammit. Very sweet.
Asidian 2005-07-10 ch 1,	abuseshivers Alright. All -sorts- of points for almost making me cry. Lovely stuff- the parallelism is -extremely- nice; I love the back-and-forth quality, the way that they talk about the same subjects without quite repeating what the other's said. Very poetic; I think that you could easily break this up into verse and not lose anything, if you wanted. little hearts
Skweeshy 2005-06-26 ch 1,	abuseSOURHGDUF cute. Repetatitivity or whatever it is is like... PART of the fanfic. YOU CAN'T REMOVE THE REPRETATIVITY. XD LOVE IT. Especially the last sentence. It's all... perfect. And... FITTING. -dies- --favourite stories--
CK 2005-06-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww, yay! Only criticism is that it was a little bit repetitive, but it was still very good. Made me feel all happy inside and like hugging Ed and Al until they explode! :D But that was very creative and well-written. I liked it a lot.
MidnightDropBox 2005-06-25 ch 1,	abuseSque!! It's so sweet!

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