Gah! so cute!! muchly love your stories!

I love it. Wes and Jen are one of my favorite couples ever.

Aww, Dustin and Marah are probably one of, if not, my favorite couple! this chapter is so cute! I can't wait until you get the next part up!!
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The Tori Hunter Chapters were equally amazing as well! keep up the good work!

Aw, this was really sweet. You could see how much thought and detail you put into this chapter, but it really paid off. The progression in this chapter was very nice.

Woot! I've been waiting for an update for like FOREVER! I'm glad you're updating again :) Cool chapter!

Cool pairings, expect for the last one. I'm not a big fan of Cole and Taylor(she's Eric's girl), but I was wondering if ya could include Cole and Alyssa. Ya know, just to make me happy.
Look forward to reading the rest of the chapters!

aw, that was sweet! I loved “Dude, two words: Anger. Management.” I could so totally see Ethan saying that. haha, great work!

I would like to see a chip/Vida or a Xander/Claire paring and also when you to the new one Operation Overdrive I have a paring in mind. just let me know when they stat showing it in your aerea

keep goin!

How about Billy/Tanya?

This was a very enjoyable read, and I liked it a lot ^^. I really have been enjoying this fic so far, and I was happy to see that you'd updated.

I hope you're able to update soon!

Aww. Adorable~! I actually can stand Hunter/Tori...is that a sad thing? x3 Not really...anyways...Um...Great Job...DO ME A ERIC/HUNTER chapter~! I don't care anymore...x3 Who knows when me and Rach will get a chapter out. *Cough*IfWeEverStartActuallyWritingIt*Cough* x3

Excellent chapter. I am glad that Hunter and Tori are together. They always seem so right for each other. I would love to see a Boom/Kat story or a Boom/Morgana or even a Boom/Morgana/Kat triangle. Please update soon.

It's funny- I was never that into Hunter/Tori, but now I'm beginning to like it better than Blake/Tori, even. Not really sure why... *shrugs* But yep, definitely liked this chapter. Nice one.

And yeah, heh, Udonna/Llienbow. But you did ask for any MF pairings, and that is a cannon one... *grins* Like I said, I've only seen one fic that involved it, so it'd be interesting to see another author attempt it. I have no idea what it would be like, though, writing it. Another MF pairing could be Niella and...whoever. Clare does need a dad after all. And, hmm... maybe Leelee with someone... don't know who, though. Leelee pairings are pretty rare, too.

Anyways, I'll keep on thinking of not-very-often-done pairings for you. *grins*

Good chapter, and OFC is Original Female Character actually.