VERY good story. Extremely well-written and engaging.

Good flow, and highly entertaining.

A little heavy on the homoerotic subtext and outright homosexual overtones, but those can be easily overlooked by readers who aren't interested it that.

Definitely "A" Level work!

Hey that was awesome! You rock!

awesome chapter

Might be an epic but a very good story and hope there is another one. Loved the way the characters developed, made us care for them - new and old. Thanks for sharing.

Yes, you did bring it to an end, but left a huge honkin' space to drive a sequel through the size of a mothership. Thanks for the dedication, that was sweet, but not necessary. Your friendship is worth it. So Eric will ride again! you will most certainly get lots of reveiws for this! And deserve every single one! Dinky

Poor Mac, out of the frying pan and into the fire for him. I can't beleive your epid is finally coming to a close...sort of. Dinky

Alas this great story has finally come to an end or NOT! Been a long and enjoyable ride through the years and I shall look forward to the sequel.

Thank you and your muse, now I think I'll just go and reread this.

(Enthusiastic Applause...)

Finally, we see an ending! :D Not that I wanted to see it *end*, mind you, I look forward to an upcoming sequal of some sorts... (Hope, hope, hope...) At any rate, it's well done, well writen, and very, very much enjoyed.

okay just a poke to see if you still plan on finishing this great story. It seems like it's been forever since you updated it...wait a minute it has been forever.

Wow - I think you snuck this chapter by me - been reading it at that other archive, now I've added this to my story alert list. Love the Janet piece she is such a formidable character (doctors scare me too). You are such a fabulous writer, hope your new family appreciates your talents as much as I do. Please don't make me wait another 5 months for an update. Thanks (and I love ship so I'm really looking forward to the next chapters).

Wow this is god. Cant wait for more and will have to read the first part now.

Wow, a spell checker. Cool! LOL

I hope to finish up in the next chapter.. or two, at most. Thank you for your continued support and kind words. Only your comments have kept me going from time to time. Thank you.

Have an idea for yet a third story in this sequence.. if you are willing?

Jolene

I just love this story and I really, really hope you finish it some day. You are so close to ending it! I'll keep looking for more chapters!

This faithful fan thanks you for the great new chapter.

Really glad to hear that you have had a family reunion. I can relate to that situation since I had a brother return to the family fold after an absence of 25 years 6 years ago. We are closer now I believe than when we were growing up. Hope that you and your brother will also develop that same closeness.

First of we wanted to say we are very happy that ye found your brother. Second this was an awesome chapter and we really can't wait for more. So keep up the good work!