A great story. Very good.

Oh, just awesome! I loved it!! :) So very well written! Great job!!

I thought that this was a really interesting idea. Of course, Han must have done some thinking before he turned around and came back, and I think that this is a great way to give us a glimpse of that thinking.

Plus, it was really funny. I think you nailed Han really well. :)

~ AmazinglyMe

that was awesome! you've got han down perfectly! i really loved how you did all of the dialogue. i thought it all really fitted han's character. the fact that you claim to not know much about star wars doesn't show at all in here and i think that's great. as a writer myself, star wars is a fandom i'd be very apprehensive about stepping into writing wise, but i might get there someday. anyway, you did a beyond great job w/ this! ^_^

I really like Han's sub-conscious. And, I'm happy he listened to it. Interesting how his sub-conscious knew how much he really liked Leia so early in their relationship.

Great, very original story! Han's subconscious. (giggles)

"Paradise Snare" is pretty good; I've got all three books ("Snare", "The Hutt Gambit", and "Rebel Dawn"). If you can get hold of them, it'll explain the whole Bria thing in more detail than "Snare" alone would. All I'm going to say is her betrayal of Han runs deeper than just leaving him on Coruscant that night.

Fic-wise, I like it. More and more I see these "loose end" fics (as in tying up said ends), and more and more I come back for them. You've done amazingly well here. You should do more of this kind of thing.

Wow. That was really really amazing. Not only is your writing style simply spectacular, but I am extremely impressed how you're able to beautifully sculpt both sweet and hilarious moments into each other. This masterpiece was extremely funny, along with being truthful and touching. And I loved Han's reaction to Luke. Very very fitting.

On my favorites.