You did a great job with the different POVs. I really enjoyed the story.

What a great adventure and n amazign story. It was a great case fic, Tony centric and team invloved fic, one of the best. You did a fantastic job and to much kudos to you, I have to say job well done.

Crap, that was not expected. Man, this is just going from bad to worse in just one chapter. What can happen next?!

That, was a very well written, structured, and executed chapter. I loved every bit of it. Those drugs are something. Amazing job!

For some reason, I knew it was going to be him, I just had this... gut feeling. Amazing job with these first few chapters, you write so well and with such detail, it's precise and adequte. Amazing job.

Great story-telling. Sounds like you really like DC.

This story was soo cool! Wonderful storytelling! Thanks!

That was perfection in the form of Tony DiNozzo

I love this story. I have re-read it a number of times. It has just the right mix of angst, and Tony-whump without being depressing.
Just a small thing that I notice every time I read it, your gun stats in chapter 5 add up to 106% instead of 100%. I'm numbers person so I notice things like that.
Love it and hope you'll write more again soon.

Excellent story! I positively adored it! Such a great look at Tony and the team as a whole!

Hey great start!

very much enjoyed reading this

I liked that Magnum ep very much, ref works perefctly here

'He yanks one end free and wraps it once around her chest and several times around the ring, tying it off. On shore, the people trying to help are being dragged by the strength of the river.'

oh, priorities indeed

'He has to at least get McGee home to his family for Christmas and ideally, be able to test the mistletoe again himself at the staff party.'

I like the understated, humourous way of showing his priorities.

Again, did not expect the ending, eep! really