Mm, nice, nice. I like it. The story kind of has a silent feel to it, like it should.
I like this a lot, though I couldn't really explain why. It's going on my favorite stories list.

Aww...So good! i like this chapter! Write more please!

~Shuffle is not enough~

The time will come FOR? For what, exactly? This is a good fic, a little thrillerish, makes me squirm and feel a little sad, and it's good, but I don't get what Yoogs is waiting for...

Blessed be