very interesting point of view. makes me think about how to define "dead city". i guess vash would be very happy to know all the death and destruction he caused lead to new life in the end.

Nice fic! It's interesting to read from a different viewpoint. Your created creatures were interesting and well-described, and the whole story was very vivid. It did feel a bit like a nature show, but it had a deeper meaning to it.

The final line was especially interesting. I love how this is written! You have a very clear and wonderful style! Keep up the good work.

—Alaena

Hey Shads! Laih here.

I haven't been reading fanfic in general of late, but this has just reminded me that yes, by golly, there are good fics out there! I really like this one- it's a reaffirmation that life continues, no matter what. Fantastic job! _

A truly original idea. I love how you start us off with one idea of what's happening, then slowly lead us away from it until we finally realize what's actually going on. Your writing does a great job of showing just alive this "dead" city really is.

I love it. Very good fic there. _