This is truly an excellent piece of work.

"The city of Oran was divided into two parts: the harbor, and everything else."

That's absolutely my favorite line. I loved how you simultaneoulsy compared each of the characters. Your writing style was brilliant and the way you used the dialogue reminded me of Cry, the Beloved Country. It truly comes off as a screenplay like that.

Great work and I look forward to seeing more from you.

wow. I don't read movies often, but this is good. keep going.

Wonderful! And such a unique idea!