OK, Now I have the master list and I am starting at the beginning! I never knew fiction could come with outtakes- I love it! If this was your first ever fanfic I am SO intimidated, I may NEVER try my hand at it... What are you - some sort of doujinshi savant? ;-)

Looking forward to moving on down the list -

Going back over this, it's amazing how much you've improved in so many ways. I mean, just for example, Goku's speech; his actions were pretty well IC, but his speech stuck out to me (of course, I'm also curious as to how he made it downstairs before Gojyo). I'd whine about certain other "OOC" things, but you clarify them in the rest of the series so I'm glad I don't have to. :)

Even still, the Outtakes were *hilarious*. XD Especially the "Outtake Outtake"
~Shin-no-Nekochan >|< >o+

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In reference to the outtakes: You've got one twisted imagination girl... And I LOVE IT! I don't now how you managed to write such a serious fic and then write outtakes like that.

The story itself is amasing! Loved it a lot (but now I curse myself for not having watched the second season of Saiyuki (mostly only sticked to the manga)). Once again I loved the way you portrayed Gogyo.

And you say that this was your first Saiyuki fanfic? You are a real genius then!

I'm liking this story very much so far (jumped over to Torrent from True Colours before going back for chapter 3). And I have to tell you I adored the outtakes. I have a bad case of the giggles now, thank you. XD

I liked this talk with Gojyo and Goku. Gojyo is, after all, supposed to be a big-brother-ish figure to Goku, and I think that was done well here. The outtakes were funny, too.

Aw, that was so sweet, and then some Gojyo x Sanzo action in the end ^^. I loved the outakes, they were great, hehehehehe.

I LOVE the outtakes! They were hilarious!

-LOVED- the outtakes. Beautiful character description, and lovely plot. Definitely a fave.