Kudos to a great story! Ed was in character and the ending sentence was a good implication as opposed to what people on the site usually see

Whoa. I love how you wrote it like Ed was write a letter to his father (should he ever find it). Good job!

This story is so so SAD
Over and Out
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I read this a long time ago, but I didn't review, so here it is...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DOING A DEATHFIC!

p.o.a

omg. that was really good. sad. but way true about his father. ozzum job. u should do another one

0_0...Well, I guess the bible chould help.

It was go...

Im going to send this to a goth person, and see if they somehow suddenly stop going to school...
DONT EVA LET LIFE PASS YOU BY!

that's REALLY,REALLY good, and REALLY,REALLY freaky and REALLY,REALLY depressing. but kudos to you for getting inside ed's mind...

I read this again.
I'm practically crying, and I sent it to my friend and she's depressed too.
I've read this story about 6 times in the past half hour, and the last two lines about 20 times.
I'm throughly depressed now. Thanks. I wanted to be.
I love this story. Will there be more? More depressing one-shots, please.

MY...MY...MY LOVER!

T.T

wow that was great...and really sad this is the second story u wrote that i actualy cried...never stope writing...ur great

a sad well written story. Very good. Ja Ne, Zirra

*sobbing uncontrollable*

Damn...That was very angsty...but still very good... -cries- Don't ever do that to poor Edward again! -throws things-

WOW...I'm speechless. That was SO awesome! I mean...It was just...WOW!

P.S. Please keep writing fanfics, cuz I love all the ones you've done so far!

*tear* SAD! Poor Edward! Omg, that was so good, I'm honestly crying...-thumbs up- good jawb! (hah, I love spelling things like that)