*Sniff* I am in tears right now. Awesome story but very depressing ending.

I thought chapter 33 was sad. holy crap.
"And then sirius's world stopped, because James Potter lay dead at his feet"
reduced me to a blubbering idiot for at least 15 minutes. why'd JK have to kill them?!?!? :'( :'(
it doesn't help that We Are Broken by Paramore started playing, either. top quality, but extremely depressing, work. good job, i suppose :'( :'(

Oh my god. This chapter has made me cry so hard. I both hate you and love you for writing something so amazing. Oh my god, I'm gonna be sobbing so hard I'm going to dehydrate myself :'( <--does not convey the way I'm feeling...*insert sad laughter here*

okay I'm just going to stop reading now because i know your going to go on and tell how their friendship splits up and i hate being reminded of that! I love the story so far though

I dunno if her rationalization over why going to Dumbledore would be a terrible idea makes sense, but I suppose you have to keep it canon :P

AH SO SAD! This story got very very awesome once they left school. I LOVE it now. Not even the Sabrina bits; I just ADORE how you portray the marauders. Reading this chapter made me nearly cry. If I'd been playing sad music, I WOULD have cried! Jeez, girl!

*favs* :)

Brilliant. This story just gets better and better!

Why are they saying goodbye forever? They would still be able to visit so long as Peter told them the location...

This part is getting very interesting! You make the decision to switch to Wormtail make lots of sense :) Well done!

aww how sweet! I'm enjoying this story! It continues to be well-written and your characterizations are good :)

Well, it's well-written. I'm pretty sure I know exactly how the plot will go from here on out... but most fanfiction is that way, so no worries! And I look forward to seeing if these OCs are well-developed characters... will Katie be a vapid **? Will Sabrina be perfect in every way imaginable?
On to chapter two! :)

oh. my. god. i never once cried during the books. i felt hollow, depressed, i got choked up, i punched the pages, i got big waves of depression, but never ONCE cried. this fan fiction actually made me cry.

I've been reading this like mad, determined to finish before it gets too late and I simply fall asleep. I'm literally freaking out here... even though I know what happens in the end, it's just as suspensful.

this is the second night ive spent staying up late reading this story. it is AMAZING. Normally in marauders fics I get bits of sadness that they die, but in this I get serious waves of it, and I almost don't want to read anymore because of their impending doom. You're doing an AWESOME job. I can't wait to finish!!

Oh my gosh, that had to be one of THE BEST! fanfics i have ever read! :)
It was extremely well written and had a good plot line!
I was SO upset when James and Lily died, I almost started crying! :'(
I'm really sorry for not reviewing before now, but i was trying to read as fast as possible, I'm not really supposed to be on the computer :)

But, yeah, I TOTTALY LOVED IT!
:) :):):):):):)