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MittknightDr
2008-09-13
ch 12,
abuseKWL!

Update! Please!
Selonianth
2008-08-12
ch 12,
abuseI LOVE IT AND I NEED MORE
Shadow65
2008-08-11
ch 12,
abuseplease make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story please make the new story
Draeconin
2008-07-08
ch 3,
abuseIt seems you're unwilling to stray far from canon. I was rather hoping to see Harry in Slytherin, where he could develop needed skills. Ah, well. Too bad.
Draeconin
2008-07-08
ch 2,
abuseYou have changed Harry's personality and magic, and yet he is yet again saddled with the willow and phoenix feather wand. If his magic and personality had changed afterward, that would be one thing, but don't you think that such factors should be taken into account?
jpotterNY
2008-07-05
ch 12,
abuseA good story, I hope you continue it eventually.
Insane and Logical
2008-06-29
ch 12,
abuseYou really need to update!
blackdragon0
2008-06-08
ch 8,
abuseJust to let you know, Tom Riddle isn't a muggle born. His mother, Merope Gaunt, is a witch, and she married a muggle. So he's actually a half blood.
keichan2
2008-06-06
ch 12,
abuseI like the idea and the way you put it into form.

My only problem (other than your lake of updates ;-p) is that there are here and there sentences obviously missing a part...

Have you stopped writing, or is it only a (long) pause? I would really like to read more!
Wauzi
2008-05-27
ch 12,
abuseGreat story, I like "your" independent, clever Harry. Hope you will continue this fic someday.

Wauzi
bigot hater
2008-04-24
ch 3, anon.
abuse** no a gryffindor is the most bigoted so you just put a non bigot into a bigot house so you ** the story goddam u and ur ** the story over i hope ur happy fu
Iris Arch
2008-04-23
ch 2,
abuseWhy was lily's and James' trunk in the DURSLEY attic? For that matter, why was anything magical or even faintly related to magic doing in the Dursley house? Even if Lily was Petunia's sister, there was no way that Petunia would've kept her stuff in that house. You already see how she reacts to Harry and his magic so she would not keep anything of Lily or of James in her house.
swordbunny4486
2008-03-31
ch 12,
abusecool
HappeeGoLuckee
2008-03-21
ch 12,
abuseVery nice. Thank you.
shankstar89
2008-03-19
ch 12,
abusegreat story please update soon.
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