Hey!
Me again, don't be freaked out!:D
Confusing, but I like it...
Do they end up together though? I don't quite get the hint...
Chimo
Zoe

Oh... I loved this. I'm speechless, really. Amazing story.

Well... It was nice, but I'm confused by the narative line. Did they end up together or not?

I loved how you sort of linked the weather to her moods, and the descriptions were great.

I love this it is very weird yet i love it.

Totally brill.
LOVE it.
**Duckies

Hello, I really like the way you write the story. Especially about the clouds. It is very colourful. People mostly see clouds as just either gray or white, but in yours you put in the detail, the emotion. It suits the mood. Ah... but I don't really get the story though XD. I am confused with the timeline, I am not sure which happens when. But, it is a very good. It is the memory, sometimes we remember things and they are not all chronologically arranged. Hope to see more fics from you. Good Luck ~

I fancied this fic. I was particularly intrigued, at first, because I knew this fic WAS going to be on the ecclectic side of things just from the title/summary, if you know what I mean. I found this over at the ferveoproject master list and I've really got to tell you that I spent my time looking over the titles there, nitpicking and trying assume what I could from the titles (which is difficult sometimes) and this one really caught my eye.

What really struck me is that I went over to your profile (Curious from your excellent way of writing) and that you're really quite young! Alas, I am 10 + 5 now as well. It's just weird, is all, finding someone my age who writes so cool (in that different, new-wave sense, if you know what I mean) and actually knows what they're doing! Usually all the brilliant writers are in their higher teens and even in their twenties. So this is real cool. I liked how your Hermione was quite random, even childishly vulnerable in a way -- not totally grown up by throwing in irrelevent things, although I did get the gist that she did that to lessen the misery in the tone. It's perfectly realistic the way you wrote it. My mind works that way so it was... relieving? And I adored the parts of conversation b/w Draco and Hermione. It was funny and even bittersweet. I really just very liked the way you portrayed them, not too adult. Because everyone is sort of trying to evolve them into large-word-saying-elaborate-articulate-witty ADULTS and sometimes (even though I'm a big fan) I can't quite relate and I just want to see them acting like... people.

Enough rambling. Good job, it was a tough subject. Five golden stars and an Oscar. I loved your fic and dear heebies, girl, you've got talent.

Adieu.

Cheers,
attica.

that was nice...in a weird sort of way. i like it.

love it...sequel!5*

I really like it. The jumps in time worked flawlessly, all coming back to revolve around the clouds in the sky. Awesome job. :)

It was good. Good how you kind-of-but-not-really cleared it up in the end. Like the difference between the italics and the regular, except there wasn't one and you still don't even really realize it.

Whoa. That was such a good story! Bravo.
You are an amazing writer. This was like
nothing I've ever read before. Whoa... I
still can't believe how wonderful it was!

eh, i had a rather hard time understanding this, actually, but i'd certainly like to read more.

Aw... Hooray for semi-plots! Hooray for them! That was just sweet. Sweet, yet quite complicated. A very realistic romance.

Wow. I love this... I just wish it was a little tiny bit less confusing, time-wise. I get the sense that this last conversation was one of the beginning conversations, but the most 'recent' conversation was sandwiched in the middle-beginning, etc... I don't think moving them around is necessary, but just a few more timeline hints would help. Apart from that little qualm, I love the overall effect! If this is your drabble... well, let's just say I really want to toddle off and see what your "real stuff" is ^.~trieste