Awesome this is very brilliant I like the way Revan kicks Jolee in the knee in his hut, and kicks him in the shin.
Brilliant.
I think that stick looked like a wand.

Good Job. I really like it that Jolee know before the crew that he knew the young Revan, and how she changed from then to now.

That was funny. Really good, and you were able to keep Jolee in character. I don't think I could do that.

*islaughing hysterically* I haven't made it to Kashyk yet, but my brother has, and Jolee is hilarious. This story makes him all the more so! When I finally get to Kashyk, I am going to have amusing memories of this story!

This was so funny! Poor Jolee...those two sound like monsters. And just what WAS that stick thingy?

You did good. We nvr rly see a story about a character in a game for Star wars that is a partial NPC. Keep writin and good luck

Funny and fun to read. You should write more like this (make it a series!) that would explain why certian things are the way they are in the game.

Nice. hehe, that's really good, that's all though? (teardrop)