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Reviews for: At the Beginning
bannonluke
2007-03-06 . chapter 1
A very sweet fan fic; quite romantic; and the use of the line, "God's in His heaven. All's right with the world." put a smile on my face. I also enjoyed the fact Asuka still teases Shinji a lot; that to me shows while perhaps less abrassive she's not completely OOC.
Withdrawn
2006-04-09 . chapter 1
Strange. Good, but strange.
Jindai-Ikari
2006-03-04 . chapter 1
Very cute, although you said it in a consealing kind of way it screamed "THEY'RE MARRIED AND THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!!" LOL I love it! Keep up the good work ^_^
.Symphony.In.The.Abyss.
2006-01-26 . chapter 1
wow i really like it im adding this to favs for sure!
SpiralUchiha
2005-10-29 . chapter 1
That was good.I really like the bold poam writing you did, it was beautiful
Andy
2005-09-05 . chapter 1
I forgot to review this the first time I read it, so I'll review it now... I like this fic it's cute and happy, with a good ending. good job.
Mango-moo
2005-09-04 . chapter 1
I love this story! Very well written and a nice take on things!
Silk Hope
2005-07-06 . chapter 1
Wow this is very good! I hate to admit but I am a fan of Asuka and Shinji pair. I do think they should be together.

Love how you used the their motto thing in here. It is to my extent perfect.
Hououza
2005-06-25 . chapter 1
Ah, I got you now.

That was, without a doubt, a beautiful story. Straight onto my gavorites that goes...if there is still room ^_^;

I think you captured the moment perfectly. the closing line summing it up nicely. With or without song that was an excellent story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
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