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Fool-4-Fantasy
2007-03-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was really cute! hehe... Should have known that with Veggie being so self-centered he wouldnt notice something like that!
Liz
2005-12-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was hilarious!
bongoqueen
2005-09-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseNow that's funny...
PerfectCell17
2005-07-18
ch 1,
abuselol That was cute! ^o^ Hehe, when Vegeta's into himself, he really doesn't notice anyone else, does he? Good job!
CaptainAbsent
2005-07-14
ch 1,
abuse*clutches sides* Oh god that was funny. Veggie's so self obsessed
Linkin Park 04
2005-06-27
ch 1,
abusethats not very much to give a good judgment but it was rather humorous
Nekoni
2005-06-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat sure got a giggle and a grin out of me, hehehe...

It's very typical of Vegeta to miss things like that, it seems,

nice lil' fic! It would have been better, longer-- but I sure did love it, got to the point *winks*
super saiyan 4 chichi
2005-06-26
ch 1,
abuseLMAO very funny well done ^_^
Miko Kikyou
2005-06-26
ch 1,
abusehahaha. great humor fic, could have used some more details. you could make it longer or something, but if you don't want to, it's fine as is. really great story.
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