 Fool-4-Fantasy 2007-03-15 . chapter 1That was really cute! hehe... Should have known that with Veggie being so self-centered he wouldnt notice something like that! |
 Liz 2005-12-11 . chapter 1 That was hilarious! |
 bongoqueen 2005-09-27 . chapter 1 Now that's funny... |
 PerfectCell17 2005-07-18 . chapter 1lol That was cute! ^o^ Hehe, when Vegeta's into himself, he really doesn't notice anyone else, does he? Good job! |
 CaptainAbsent 2005-07-14 . chapter 1*clutches sides* Oh god that was funny. Veggie's so self obsessed |
 Linkin Park 04 2005-06-27 . chapter 1thats not very much to give a good judgment but it was rather humorous |
 Nekoni 2005-06-26 . chapter 1 That sure got a giggle and a grin out of me, hehehe...
It's very typical of Vegeta to miss things like that, it seems,
nice lil' fic! It would have been better, longer-- but I sure did love it, got to the point *winks* |
 super saiyan 4 chichi 2005-06-26 . chapter 1LMAO very funny well done ^_^ |
 Miko Kikyou 2005-06-26 . chapter 1hahaha. great humor fic, could have used some more details. you could make it longer or something, but if you don't want to, it's fine as is. really great story. |