ya know entering jareth!

Im totally loving this. Please continue soon your spinning a beautiful tail.

I loved the portrayl of Jareth in this chapter! It was dead on with the movie! I really hope that you keep up the excellent work!

Yes i remember this and your sister was right to bug you to finish i cant really give any constructive criticism at this stage except that you should up the pace a bit and update as fast aS POSSIBLE it looks really good though

oh! interesting! wow!
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Awesome story, please update soon!

Wow, keep up the good work. I really like the story so far! Excellent work!

Wow, nice job creating the general atmosphere! I love how you portrayed Sarah's anguish! Excellent, keep it up!

This is a great story!