loved the story intersting and i'll agree on your point with bioware not allowing the OC character not being reconized i think that if you still had aribeth's ring they could have put in a script check of somekind to enhance aribeth's part in the game. any how good opening saw one or two mistakes mostly "no" instead of "now" but thats little stuff. if ya got the time i got a story of my own "One Drows Journies" here on FAnfiction well any how hope ya continue this well i'm out