There's got to be more to their friendship than the game shows us and this is a really nice glimpse into the way things were. And the first paragraph is gorgeous. So definitely write more Yuan!

It's very good, though I wish you'd continue it.

Ah! I saw your post on the LJ community, so I decided to read it! :D If you're wondering I'm solarsunfish on LJ, just if you wanted to know! This was a good short piece about Yuan, I heart him! Anywho keep up the good work! :D

That's actually real good. Very nice visualization, yep.