oh, cute! I'm curious as to who would be the dominator in that pairing.

Teehee, Seto-kun knows he liked it! :]

That was so sweet what malik did to get seto's atenchon. what happens next? when is the other one going to be posted? pleses hurry!

Aww! No fair! Hee, a very good place to stop though. I loved what you did, making the beggining scene all ominous and dark, and then turning it into Malik/Seto goodness! I dunno, I just thought that was awesome. Your other fics look interesting as well, I like your choice in pairings! Keep it up!

You didn't have to stop there...but you did. I liked the pairing and also you managed to keep it OOCless which is hard to do (when you write such a pairing).

It was pretty short but good though. I hope to see more Seto/Malik from you :)

Haha, they'd need MUCH more than just a lock to keep me out of that room! XD (Somewhat) seriously though, the one thing that really got my attention was that, near the end, after the kiss, it didn't become a big love-confessing sob-fest. Though I like some fluff-romance just as much as everyone else, that is the fastest way to annoy me. To me, that always seemed like just a way to bypass all laws of psyche and get on to the lemons. I also like how you cut the story off with dialogue; it's an abrupt ending, but an amusing one nonetheless. Heh, funny funny.

nice.

WOW!! i never thot this couple would work. actually, i never even thot of this couple.
ahahahha its really nice!!

Oh la la! Darn ;(

Why'd you have to stop? ;_; You should've kept going =p

I demand more... or else! *holds up sword* XDD

I like this. It's really funny! Though I have to say it was a little weird.o_o