 LeolaTaylor 1/25/06 . chapter 3GRAH! WHO IS IT!
I'm sorry. I'd just like to know who his chauffer is. I like the story so far. Keep it up! Update soon! |
 Princess-No.1 7/5/05 . chapter 2Hahaha, hilarious. Poor, poor chauffeur... Nice chap!
Mini-Murderdoll |
 LeolaTaylor 7/1/05 . chapter 1I like it, especially the "permission to drool" thing. Seto-fangirls make me laugh. I can laugh, because I used to be one. |
 LeolaTaylor 7/1/05 . chapter 2I like it. I love Puppyshipping! It's so kawaii! |
 Princess-No.1 6/27/05 . chapter 1Haha, hilarious! And it's fun to read this out of the 'I' person (what the heck is the name for that..?). Maybe you could make the chapters longer (so I can read more... _) and maybe a little more detailed (to make the chapters longer hehe), but anyway, I hope to see more of this one...
Bye, Mini-Murderdoll |
 fluffnight 6/26/05 . chapter 1*poke* It's me.
Dude, nice. New grammar mistakes. (I know you know) I'll teach ya how to change later.
Like how you added ending. It nice. Remind me to read next chappie when made.
Okiez, until next time. (Lol, don't reviews just make you tingle with happiness inside?) |
 Her Sweetness 6/26/05 . chapter 1This is a great idea you've stumbled onto, here. It's utterly wonderful. The idea, I'm meaning. But I like how you did it in journal form and I'm loving how you started and ended this. The whole anonymous thing. It's genius. And of course, with every completment comes crtzesmism, but I have very little. I simply suggest that you make it a bit long and in more deatil next time. I'm aware that this is a ournal typr thing, but dialog wouldn't be a bad idea.
Anyway. That's all I have to say. I would love you if you continued, this is fabulous.
Goodbye and Goodluck. |