Nice story.

Makes me wonder if Vivi actually knew that he was cutting short his life by creating his children, but hid that fact the KNEW from the other Mages...

A good story, nonetheless.

Till next time,

MS

Now that is a deep story, and nicely done.

So very cute and sweet! I wish there were more fanfics out there like this one. So many have good plot ideas. But the grammer, spelling, and redundantness make it painful to read. I didn't notice a singal mistake in this one, though!

That was a wonderful piece! It was nice to read about Vivi and the impact he made on Gaia after he stopped. It really moved me. What a gift you have for writing!It's a dying trait to have on this site. I was very happy to find this great read amongst all of the badly written, poorly misspelled trash.

It's nice to know my friends and I on here aren't the only ones that pay attention and truly care enough about our writings to proof them before displaying.

Told ya this before, but I just love this. It's so cute and lovely, but with a hint of sadness to it, just like the Black Mages and Vivi. I love how they don't give up, no matter what, which is such a human trait and yet they're genetically engineered. It's like they earned their freedom and humanity and I think I'm just spouting things now but yah.

Love how you gave a reason for Vivi's children, since the game never did.

Very very nice.

Thank you!

Vivi village... heh! A cute and sweet drabble. Heroes may die(stop?), but legends live forever.