wow, cute story-is it a one off or will it continue?

Very good! A few typos, but those happen. I loved the potions class part- I can just imagine the look on Snape's face! Also, I agree, the chocolate cherries are a nice touch. Keep updating and continue the great work!

ba da ba ba ba im lovin it! awesomeness! gay slash nothin better! lol keep it coming!

I loved it, though I wouldn't say it was cute, it was very warming and made me feel all fuzzy inside.

Liked this one too. Left me laughing. Good one. :)

Aww! That was so adorable. I loved it. Very sweet. I wish i could have a relasionship as loving as therse. Then again it might help if I actualy liked someone enough. Anyway, lovely story. Simply beutiful.

i don't know what to say first oh my god or wow i mean i absolutely thouroughly enjoyed that and i loved the chocolate cherries, that was cute too. the scene in the potions class was classic and i loved it i can only imagine that snape wanted to hurl at the part in the story. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910