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| Jynjah Sidel 2006-06-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseiT cAnT EnD lIkE tHiS! i WaNnA kNoW mOrE! |
| Sara Duquesne 2005-09-05 ch 6,  | abusePerfect, there's nothing else I can say, moved as I am at the moment! Baby G... Greg's always the best! Keep writing, I'll be there! |
| juli 2005-09-04 ch 6, anon. | abuseAw,I love this so much ! |
| cherry-kiss-red 2005-09-04 ch 6, | abuseOh my god... I really printed it out... I love it!! I want more of that kind... plaese! |
| ForensicsFreak1988 2005-08-15 ch 5, | abuseAWw...Butterflies... Okay, done. You need to post Enongh already so I CAN READ IT! |
| ForensicsFreak1988 2005-08-15 ch 2, | abuseMuch better actually, though yeah, long time ago. |
| csismylover 2005-07-30 ch 5, | abuseAww, I'm so excited. If it's a girl... name her Ciara. Pronounced see-are-uh. It's a pretty awesome name and it means "saint-like." It took me forever to find what my naem meant but I did it. Yeah, see-are-uh. Ciara... |
| Jamie L. 2005-07-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat story, I just love GSR! Don't you? Just want to tell you though, if, like in many other stories, you kill the baby off, I will personaly hunt you down and stick your head in a toilet. Not really, just don't do it, because everyone needs a happy ending every once in a while. Anyways, if you need any baby name suggestions, I have plenty in mind and won't hesitate to suggest any. Keep up the great work! |
| Jasmine 2005-07-30 ch 5, anon. | abusei liked the beginning and the end. One of my favourtie shows is Crime Scene Investigation. Im only 15 right now so i wouldnt have a clue as to what to write in a review like this. So here it goes... I particuly liked the plot and theme. However the whole murder solve theme is my thing. I didn'r quite get the ending ... is there even an ending of when he comes back from a dream or something and realises he dreamt of the whole thing? i felt it went from dream to dream to dream then onto what felt like an everlasting dream then it kind of stopped and never went back to real life. If it had i think i missed it. And i think if you did write the ending to that you need to put it clearer otherwise all good. If there's another bit im sorry if ive missed it! But you're the lucky first that i've read on this sight and left a review for so i hope all goes well for you! |
| Eden Eyes 2005-07-29 ch 5, | abuseI loved this so very much, I think I'm addicted to your stories! lol. :P Keep up the grand work, and update very very soon! |
| csismylover 2005-07-25 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait either. |
| ForensicsFreak1988 2005-07-22 ch 4, | abuseYay- Sara throwing up on Ecklie!! I LOVE it! HeHe Lol Oh, man. (wow I'm a freak- we're freaks.) |
| ElastigirlThePresident 2005-07-21 ch 4, | abuseOhh!! I like this story lots! Update soon pleze! -ETP |
| Eden Eyes 2005-07-19 ch 4, | abuseAWESOME, I'm not even the pregnant one, and I can't wait! Keep up the great work and update very VERY soon! And to everyone out there reading this story, update very nicely so she will update very very soon! Keep up the pretty outstanding work! ~Sidle chick |
| Jamie 2005-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abusePretty good so far. Keep going. By the way, I think you should write the dinner. Hurry! |