 Diva Urd 2005-11-10 . chapter 1Gah, I should have reviewed this a long time ago - sumimasen! ::grovels::
Anyway, on to the story... I already told you I loved it back when you originally showed me, and this hasn't changed. Kou probably dreams almost every night about clocking the ** one, and that is very much understandable. This was very satisfactory, indeed. ;-)
Just one small thing: "pyro-powered prince" sounds a little out of place. I think I know what you were aiming for, but a more normal term would do the spot it's in better IMO. Otherwise, a great little short! |