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AVAAntares
2006-05-02 . chapter 1
/laugh/ Wow. I'd pay cash to see Kougaiji kayo Gyokumen Koushu! What a pleasant thought. And such dead-on characterization of Lirin...

A fun story. Nice job! :)
Diva Urd
2005-11-10 . chapter 1
Gah, I should have reviewed this a long time ago - sumimasen! ::grovels::

Anyway, on to the story... I already told you I loved it back when you originally showed me, and this hasn't changed. Kou probably dreams almost every night about clocking the ** one, and that is very much understandable. This was very satisfactory, indeed. ;-)

Just one small thing: "pyro-powered prince" sounds a little out of place. I think I know what you were aiming for, but a more normal term would do the spot it's in better IMO. Otherwise, a great little short!
narrizan
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
i like this. it's good. 'nuf said. - zan
Tora Macaw
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Oh, if only Kougaiji really could snot that vile hell **! Very well done Zell.. wonderful work indeed!
Blood-Debt
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
What a shame. I would love for that (insert several censored words here) woman to just get a taster of the pain she's dishing out... I wonder if she's being controlled by her husband...
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