Very, very interesting. I read the His Dark Materials Books this summer and I am a big fan of Sherlock Holmes.

Will's world isn't the same as ours...I should buy the book rather than ask you, but are the differences religious ones?
Are you re-editting these stories subtly, or just posting them as they were? It must be facinating to recall what was in your mind and how you think about the same things now.
Too quick is alright-that's why the Holmes short stories are better than the novel, the format is quick paced. I think people wrote their own Holmes stories after 'The Not-so-final Problem', which must make them him oldest fanfiction victim still in the limelight.
I'd keep on with this. These stories are due another lot of readers.

Entirely unexpected and fully delightful. I would like to offer a critique, but none came to mind.