I thought it was adorable. Really. And it doesn't matter if you got those facts wrong (which, I wouldn't know either...) because, you're right, it's fiction...So just focus on the fact that you wrote a great story.

mai...

I had to agree with you it sounds strange.

Or maybe I wasn't myself.

But I agree with you though its strange its cute.

I do wonder about some things in this one-shot but I do like it!

It may be a little different, but I actually found this really interesting... not to mention sweet. The whole theory behind the items made from once-living creatures and how it ties into Inuyasha's fire-rat outfit is especially interesting. Of course, I've always thought his clothes were neat, but this just adds a whole other dimension to them.

not bad. _ I liked it.

love! *glomps author* i love little character musing ficlets...especially about little mundane things. i doubt that inuyasha would really have given kagome such an open display of affection as a gift...but he might! although it IS interesting to think that an deer figured out kagome and inuyasha should be together before inu and kago did themselves...XD

Very interesting idea, I liked it a lot. A nice, refreshing break from all the mindless stuff that's been popping up all over the Inuyasha section; the whole SITE, too, even.

Anyway, great job! *applauds*

-CC

Magnificent! I love it! You really need to write some more cause you etheir have a really good tallen or really good education. I, of coarse, have no ideal wether your a adult or some pimply teenager or some samll kid that is like, some humongus genious. Well, I need to go get ready for bed, so, if you shall excuse me as I exit from this, rather enlighting letter, goodbye.

Sincerly,

Dragirlian

Not only was this completely original and well thought out, it was amazing. I really, really liked this little story because it's something I've never heard, let alone thought of. Brilliant!

Hey! That was pretty good! I've rarely seen fan-fiction, much less one-shots with that much insight. I really enjoyed reading that, and I hope to see more of your writing in the near future!