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Roses of Sharon
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
Wow... Your really into the Sango-and-Inuyasha and Miroku-and-Kagome together, but not really, thing, aren't you? I guess I sometimes think of this... Especially after I read fics like this. Its wonderful, though!
kitsune-koinu
2006-08-29 . chapter 1
:)
bobalina
2006-06-27 . chapter 1
Bonus! (Though the "what happened between you two that summer in Florence?" line was meh.) Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina
angelgrl
2006-02-23 . chapter 1
omgomgomgomgomg! im speechless...tis was very good!
Shoomy2003
2005-09-08 . chapter 1
WOW!! That was so amazing! You didn't even have to express their actions--I could see everything through their words. It was fabulous. FABULOUS!
The Last
2005-07-24 . chapter 1
Aw... this was really sweet. I think that you have both Sango's and Inuyasha's characters down pat. Good job with the writing; definitely a good idea, and I love the Kagome:Inuyasha bit at the end. Sorry it took me this long to get around to reading it!
DayLightScreamer
2005-07-02 . chapter 1
cool story, i liked it a lot!
kissabirde
2005-06-30 . chapter 1
oh mesa like. ^_^
Fantastical Queen Ebony Black
2005-06-30 . chapter 1
nice. great dialogue.
angel_tears_16
2005-06-29 . chapter 1
being too lazy to sign in right now...anyways it was good but is that all? i think it wold have been nice to see how Kagome and Inuyasha met...
Lawliet500
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Wo hoa, that was deep. That's some plot twist. I say, will you update soon? The suspense is killing me and I have to know what's going to happen. Besides, it sounds intiguing.
Veglma
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Interesting.

Cool. ^_^
Starzki
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
I liked the way you used dialogue to tell the whole story. It made it very choppy and tense, just like the situation you had them in.

And it all worked out in the end. :)
Manda
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
It's a good story, but...I'm confused. What just happened here? Anyways, update soon (any story!) and cya later ^_^
Miko Kagome Archer
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
awesome story! It made me sad though...
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