aw...
that was a very good nd well-written story:]]
i went on your homepage and saw he link to your community on livejournal
and thats also where i first started reading this story. i finally figured out that thats the reworking one...
it sounds good:]]
and i hope you update it soon:]]
until then...
HAPPY SUMMER!

T'was cute XD
No, seriously, I have nothing negative to say about this fanfiction. I thing it is quite fine now. Through, the reason I don't fav it is that political intrigues isn't really the king of stuff 'm fond of, and well, this story contains many of such. I deeply appreciate the researches that we can feel you made for the sake od this plot line. The hints, humor, and every other choice was made wisely. It's very honnorable. .. ^^"

aww, very nice story indeed.

I've already read most of your Mulan stories, but this is the first one I've reviewed... I thought I'd tell you that I absolutely love your stories. You've got flawless grammar and all that other stuff, and it's been a very, VERY long time since I've read a story as mentally stimulating as yours are. You've got really, really clever plotlines and plot twists, and all your stories have been a complete pleasure to read. I also love the way you manage to fit just the right amount of information into all those tiny little paragraphs. I have no idea how you do it.

I'll definitely be looking forward to more! With grinding teeth, even... heheh. By the way, have you ever considered writing Harry Potter stuff?

Anyway, I leave you with all my respect and best wishes. ^_^

- Wolf By Night

I love this story. It is really well done..

Nelarun of Australia

intriguing idea... like your previous work, I admire your handling of Shang and Mulan. And this concept of Mulan actually BEING condemned to death is interesting.

Yet, I struggled with some of the plot points. I wasn't especially struck with any of the secondary characters, or their subsequent motivations for helping Mulan. Perhaps it isn't fair to compare one story with another, but I was just so struck by your "Shan-Yu's Victory" and "The Ballad of Li" that I couldn't help but weigh them against this. I don't know... The characters just seem sort of washed out. Lifeless. Or maybe it just needed a few more **-kicking scenes. Or some angst/witty banter. Or perhaps I'm being unfair.

INTERSDTING ALTERNET vERSE

Three words: Awesome, captivating, and...awesome.

other reviewers: You said 'awesome' twice!

me: That's because it's twice as awesome as it is captivating.

other reviwers: Oy!

me: *(to myself)* Whatever.

It was a great story, lightbird. Hope it's as awesome as I predict Sha-Yu's Victory will be. *did that make sense to all you people?*

very detailed and well thought out plot. very good.

so mushu will be with her always rigth?
they are so cute!
cool ending
a little sad u know

Great story! Turned out wonderfully! Beautiful job! *applauds*

That's the end? Will Shang propose? Will Mulan become part of the Emperor's council if she marries Shang? Will another war break out? Please post a sequel.

^^ You write excellent stories concerning Mulan! All of them are so unique but still hold the came captivation. Great writing! ^^

Please Update ASAP. Being one of your stories you'll surprised as usual mostly. Continue writing please. Peace & love.

When's the ending coming? I've read this story a hundred times and no update still. And your Shan-yu's Victory story and no update for that either.

Are you just focusing more on your Betrothed story now? I like this story and Shan-yu's Victory more than that one, so just at least add one more chapter for either one of those.